Serezha

Noite:

General Appearance: Noite's outfit on her appearance seems to be a bit cluttered, and it is hard to see the actual dragon's colors. The gold features look a bit strange with the blue-colored primary, and the red secondary. The dachshund, despite looking quite cute, seems to have literally no connection to the outfit itself. The skin compliments well to her colors.

Scry Appearance: Noite's appearance without her outfit is soothingly coordinated. The butterfly helps bring together the primary color, which might not have blended in as well without. However, if she was a breed with larger eyes, her ice eyes would be a issue and look rather... odd.

Outfit's Connection to Lore: The outfit does go well with the royal servant theme, as it does not sport any torn clothing or messy looks.

Lore: The lore is short, however it is right to the point. I can clearly note that she was a tourist, and is trapped in what seems like a slaved shell.

Kassaiel:

General Appearance: At first look, I can infer that this dragon is a demonic creature, even a slaughter? The skin with the blood and the horns can easily hint to that. However, she seems to not have enough apparel.

Scry Appearance: Once again, this is a very neat and quite pretty dragon, but the ice eyes seem to strike again. If not for the skydancer breed, they might have became an issue. Despite this, the matching colors help contribute to each other.

Outfit Connection to Lore: Not very much is given, and the lore along with the outfit seems to hint to her being of satanic orgin.

Lore: Kassaiel does not have seem to have much of a background, and instead a few facts about her.

Maret:

General Appearance: Because Maret does not have any genes or outfits, there is not much for me to tell.

Scry Appearance: Maret is quite a pretty dragon, though the ice eyes have seem to hit again. The colors all match quite well.

Latro:

General Appearance: Latro's appearance is quite stunning, and the use of the fur-like skin on her really helps him pop out. Because the fuzzy look is usually rare, and usually used as a goofier dragon, it makes her look quite amazing as it works well with his whole appearance.

Scry Appearance: By herself, Latro looks beautiful. Her eyes match her genes and the smart use of poison helps contribute to her look. Even the faint smoke gives a lovely effect to her.

Outfit Connection to Lore: The lore is a bit confusing personally, and I cannot find a connection between her outfit and the lore written.

Lore: Lore, as previously said, is a bit confusing on who's who and what's what. I feel that it either needs to be clarified, or lengthened to explain the content more.

Rancor:

General Appearance: The outfit and the dragon himself goes together very well! It's a eye-pleasing scheme, and goes well with his natural colors. The accent is amazing with the flow-y theme, and he looks great!

Scry Appearance: Without the outfit, he looks a bit more bare and exposed. The colors are quite nice though, and don't clash. The stained is a great way to bring it all together, without making it look awful.

Outfit Connection to Lore: Rancor's lore is simply a conversation between what seems to be a lower-ranked dragon and himself. Because he is seen as the king, the outfit seems well-fitted and blends into the theme nicely. It does not sport tears, rips, or anything that would not fit royalty.

Lore: His lore is a conversation showing his elusive personality, and some of his replies to his subjects. It doesn't show too much of his personality, leaving it quite flexible.

Mordred:

General Appearance: Mordred has a beautiful play on the feathered wings and the petals, along with the hood that gives her a more spooky appearance. I can see this dragon being some power-user, or a witch of some sort.

Scry Appearance: By herself, she is simple yet lovely. The Jaguar looks good with her plague eyes and red wings, however she does look a bit more plain then others in the lair.

Koko:

OKAY SO SHE'S BORN ON MY BIRTHDAY SO I ALREADY LOVE HER but imma keep this serious

General Appearance: Koko looks great in her outfit, and it pairs surprisingly well with her color scheme. The bit of hair that peeks out of her hat looks very cool, and gives her a bit of a demon cowgirl look.

Scry Appearance: I don't really like her colors, as the orange and purple clash quite a bit, and the blue didn't help. The eyes also don't match which throws it off quite a bit.

Tiroteio:

General Appearance: Tiroteio is a beautiful dragon! The outfit matches her perfectly and even the blues look lovely with the rest of her!

Scry Appearance: Without any outfits, Tiroteio is still one of the prettiest dragons I have ever seen. The green and the browns make her look like a tree spirit, and the blue brings out a subtle pop that gives it more character!

Lavaui:

General Appearance: She's simple yet pretty, however the clashing ice and earth themes occurring seem a bit odd, and looks funny.

Scry Appearance: Because she is all basic, there is quite a bit I can't point out. However, the ice eyes will either match the orca or destroy the whole dragon, depending on what way you will go.

Jacare:

General appearance: This is a very pretty dragon, the earth tones all flowing together and making him look outstanding! By themselves the outfit may look a bit funny, and it's a generally hard outfit to work with. He pulls it together wonderfully, and he's pleasing to the eye. It's also very unique!

Scry Appearance: By himself, Jacare is still very soothing and a relaxing color scheme. The use of scales is a great idea, and they match the toxin perfectly. Many would see him as odd and boring, but with the combo he looks wonderful!

Cascabela:

General Appearance: This is one gorgeous dragon! The gold sticks out well, and the skin pulls everything together. The use of butterfly and cherub is very pretty, and the fallish colors are pleasing to the eye.

Scry Appearance: Cascabela is still beautiful without the outfit, the subtle colors and the swamp helping keep the gold from being too bright. I love her, she is a very nice dragon!

Outfit to lore: The outfit fits the lore perfectly, making her seem elusive yet showing her love for gold! However, the harp and such don't make very much sense.

Lore: Her lore shows her love of gold, and her job, while looking very neat and tidy. I love the use of fun facts and the head canon area, though the head cannon section could be sorted a bit more neatly.

Acrimony:

General Appearance: This is a very pretty dragon! The eyes match well, and the green and gold make a nature y goddess look! The Leafy Gladeboughs really help bring it together, along with the accent.

Scry Appearance: By herself, Acrimony still retains the nature goddess look, the skydancer making her seem delicate yet powerful. The stained helps make the colors look more faded and less bright, helping attribute to the soft look.

Outfit to lore: The outfit contributes and clashes with the lore. Being sent underground, she may not have access to the sunlight and plants. However, since she is a Queen there is a bit of exception, allowing for the chance that her followers gifted her with the items. The dove item is heavily related to the lore, as she does have many of the birds.

Lore: The lore is sad yet lovely. It's lengthy and full of content, along with pros and flaws of the dragon. However, it would be nice to learn more about how they all were mutated by living in the area!

Efemero

General Appearance: Much like the last few dragons, Efemero is soft and delicate in colors. The outfit goes well with her appearance, the green popping out and giving a nature-y look to the dragon. The Arctic gloves are subtle and match the colors, though it does look a bit odd with the rest of her outfit.

Scry Appearance: By herself, she is beautiful! The iridescent and the butterfly match well with the color shift, and even the soft glimmer helps tie her colors together! The only minus to this derg is her plague eyes.

Chepi:

General Appearance: Since he's not quite done yet, the outfit sticks out and looks a bit odd. The purple and gold don't seem to get along well, and it's a bit too easy to see the dragon below.

Scry Appearance: He's all basic, making him hard to judge. However, the scry that is in his bio is quite pretty! I'm excited to see his final product!

Shine

!!!!! THIS IS A OH SO PRETTY KID WOW !!!!!

General Appearance: He's a pastel blend of beautiful pinks, blues and yellows! His outfit is also more pastel and matches him beautifully! The skin really compliments his look, and the way you used the white silks to mute the rainbow ones is brilliant!

Scry Appearance: Without an outfit, he's still a very pretty dragon! Shine reminds me of sherbet or cottoncandy, because of the pretty swirls of colors from the toxin and poison.

Posy

General Appearance:This is one pretty derg! The pinks and brown flow together well with the outfit, and the skin adds a mysterious look to her!

Scry Appearance: Without her outfit, Posy is not as pretty as she was ( in my opinion). She's wonderful with everything on, but the colors seem to clash in my eyes, and once again the plague eyes have struck.

Outfit to Lore: The outfit works well with the lore, with the roses and the blood! It makes sense why they are there, other then for looking lovely.

Lore: Posy's lore is very mysterious yet hooking. The words flow well and drag the reader in, almost making them wonder why she was there, who she was speaking to, and so much more! It's very good!

Lasca

General Appearance: Lasca looks like a snow queen.. minus the snow and the queen part. She's delicate and looks as if one touch would make her fall apart. The silks are beautiful, and the thorns help with the elegant look.

Scry Appearance: Even by herself, Lasca looks like a queen or even a fairy. The rose toxin (something i love love love!) matches her blue iridescent and runes. The eyes aren't as bad as they are just a darker shade of pink, and can slip by.

Outfit to Lore: Compared to the lore, I don't really understand why she looks so elegant and cozy, but the mask does help show that she's hiding from something.

Lore: Posy's lore is very peculiar, and I love how she's neat but also too lazy to care about it. It's a nice mix :). The lore itself is clear and easy to understand, and I really would love to learn what hurt her and the reasons why!

Kathedra:

General Appearance: Kathedra's colors are dark yet go together in an eye-pleasing manner. The opal really helps tie it together! The purple from the outfits are excused by the spinner, which helps keep them in check.

Scry Appearance: Even by herself, Kathedra is perfect! The petals, spinner, and opal all get along very well, however the light eyes are the only issue as they don't match. Either way, she's still super pretty!

Croon:

imma just take a moment to stare at her... maybe an hour.

General Appearance: The use of reds and purples are so, so, so brillantly pretty, she has to be one of my favorite dragons ever. The skin used helps compliment the shadowing and almost brightens the colors. The best piece, however, is the Viper's fans. They are usually hard to use, but Croon looks amazing with them!

Scry Appearance: Opal really bonds this girl together, and does help the red parts of the outfit. The purple has no issues, even though the alloy has a yellow tint it does match her skin and isn't overused. Because of the alloy, her light eyes can be excused :).

Voski:

General Appearance: He's just so bright and quirky, I don't know where to start! I love the oranges and the use of a bit of violet, cooling him down just a bit but not overusing the dark colors. The petals are the only issue, being a bit too pale for him.

Scry Appearance: HECKING GOSH Voski is just so cute! The capsule adds that little bit of pop that keeps him from looking like a flaming ridgeback, which is a good thing. Despite having basic instead of a primary gene, he rocks the color and it looks wonderful with the rest of him!