[center]We're now OPEN | WORKING | CLOSED | [b]swamped by like 5 1k word commissions[/b]
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[nextcol]Hello, and welcome to my brand new writing shop! [s]we dont talk about the old one[/s]
Like almost every other lore shop on here, my goal is to give you a long series of words in exchange for your money.
"So Eth," you might ask, "why should I give you my money/fodder/birbs/monetary units?"
Luckily, thanks to FR’s free market, you don’t have to, but it’d be lovely if you did anyway. I have 9 years of writing experience, 3 of those spent in a Creative Writing course, literal hundreds of pages worth of practice, and a ton of examples done right here on FR! Still not convinced? No worries, I’ll let my [url=http://www1.flightrising.com/forums/art/1854415]examples[/url] speak for themselves.
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[center][b]What I will and won’t write:[/b]
[sub]Will do:
FR dragons
Worldbuilding
Character development
Descriptions
Backstories
Clan intros
Non-dragon OCs
Humans/humanoid characters
Mythical creatures
Original species descriptions
Mild Gore
FxF, MxF, MxM, from most confident to least
Won’t do:
NSFW
Extreme Gore/Torture
Trans or genderqueer characters (nothing personal, just not confident in portraying them accurately)
Canon characters (from an established media like anime or a TV show)
Real life shipping (e.g. 1D/Kpop fanfics)
Ships with large age gaps (i.e. adult with child/teenager)
Outright poetry
Anything not stated above is probably under ‘will do’.[/sub]
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[size=4][b]Word count[/b][/size]
[b]10kt/10g gets you 100 words.[/b] If you don’t specify a word count, you will be charged the final product no matter what the final length is, no exceptions. If word count is specified, I’ll always meet the minimum, and any extra words beyond that are free.
Paying by level is only available during a Wind Dom push. [s]Each additional level on a dragon past 1 adds 50 words. So if you had a level 5 dragon, it’d be worth 300 words. Level 7, 400 words. Level 10 and above increases almost exponentially, to make it worth the time it takes to level up the dragon. See the full table [url=http://i.imgur.com/3qqbfty.png]here[/url]![/s]
Words can be ‘banked’, or spread out across multiple commissions, so you don’t have to decide on just one dragon to spoil!
[size=4][b]Format[/b][/size]
Biography style (1st or 3rd): Told from an omniscient (all-knowing) perspective, i.e. you know things the character(s) doesn't. Usually a brief overview of a dragon’s life, rather than individual events, although you can request certain events be described in detail.
[url=http://www1.flightrising.com/forums/art/1854415/19#post_27116127]x[/url] [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=26095583]x[/url] [url=http://www1.flightrising.com/forums/art/1854415/20#post_28482184]x[/url]
Narrative (1st or 3rd): Told like a story, may shift between one or more characters’ perspectives. Limited perspective, meaning you see things through a character’s eyes, which allows for an unreliable narrator. Can be overview or detailed, please specify.
[url=http://www1.flightrising.com/forums/art/1854415/18#post_26977639]x[/url] [url=http://www1.flightrising.com/forums/art/1854415/10#post_24097451]x[/url] [url=http://www1.flightrising.com/forums/art/1854415/20#post_27984655]x[/url]
Custom (any): A unique style, e.g. letters, lair descriptions, dialogue. PM me and we can discuss this further, I’m open to try pretty much anything but outright poetry.
[url=http://www1.flightrising.com/forums/art/1854415/14#post_24975781]x[/url] [url=http://www1.flightrising.com/forums/art/1854415/15#post_26315165]x[/url] [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=view&tab=userpage&id=83294]x[/url]
If this section is blank, I’ll pick the format that I think is easiest to write your piece in. Sometimes I may even use your order as an excuse to experiment with a new format.
[size=4][b]Point of View (POV)[/b][/size]
1st person: I, we, us
x [url=http://www1.flightrising.com/forums/art/1854415/6#post_22291070]x[/url]
2nd person: You, yours
x
3rd person: He, she, they, theirs
[url=http://www1.flightrising.com/forums/art/1854415/18#post_26925930]x[/url] [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&id=71590&tab=dragon&did=26589556]x[/url]
[size=4][b]Tone (optional)[/b][/size]
If there’s a certain tone you’d like your piece to have, e.g. light-hearted, humorous, serious, edgy, or angsty, do specify under the Other section. Otherwise, depending on the dragon, I default to light-hearted or edgy. Those are the tones I’m most comfortable with.
[size=4][b]Tense[/b][/size]
This is pretty minor, since like 80% of my finished examples are in past tense. But if you’d prefer present tense (or future tense???), please specify in the Other section.
Past: was, had, went
Present: is, has, goes
[sub]Future (???): will[/sub]
[size=4][b]Form[/b][/size] (use a new form for each individual order):
[code]
[quote]Hello yes hi @Ethiera, I’d like to order:
[b]Username:[/b]
[b]Character name(s):[/b]
[b]Image Reference/Written description:[/b] (if dragon, use BBCode, if OC, any image/description will do)
[b]Word count:[/b]
[b]Format:[/b]
[b]POV:[/b]
[b]Character/Story Info:[/b]
[b]Payment:[/b]
[b]Other:[/b]
[/quote]
[/code]
We're now OPEN | WORKING | CLOSED | swamped by like 5 1k word commissions
Hello, and welcome to my brand new writing shop! we dont talk about the old one
Like almost every other lore shop on here, my goal is to give you a long series of words in exchange for your money.
"So Eth," you might ask, "why should I give you my money/fodder/birbs/monetary units?"
Luckily, thanks to FR’s free market, you don’t have to, but it’d be lovely if you did anyway. I have 9 years of writing experience, 3 of those spent in a Creative Writing course, literal hundreds of pages worth of practice, and a ton of examples done right here on FR! Still not convinced? No worries, I’ll let my examples speak for themselves.
What I will and won’t write:
Will do:
FR dragons
Worldbuilding
Character development
Descriptions
Backstories
Clan intros
Non-dragon OCs
Humans/humanoid characters
Mythical creatures
Original species descriptions
Mild Gore
FxF, MxF, MxM, from most confident to least
Won’t do:
NSFW
Extreme Gore/Torture
Trans or genderqueer characters (nothing personal, just not confident in portraying them accurately)
Canon characters (from an established media like anime or a TV show)
Real life shipping (e.g. 1D/Kpop fanfics)
Ships with large age gaps (i.e. adult with child/teenager)
Outright poetry
Anything not stated above is probably under ‘will do’.
Word count
10kt/10g gets you 100 words. If you don’t specify a word count, you will be charged the final product no matter what the final length is, no exceptions. If word count is specified, I’ll always meet the minimum, and any extra words beyond that are free.
Paying by level is only available during a Wind Dom push. Each additional level on a dragon past 1 adds 50 words. So if you had a level 5 dragon, it’d be worth 300 words. Level 7, 400 words. Level 10 and above increases almost exponentially, to make it worth the time it takes to level up the dragon. See the full table here!
Words can be ‘banked’, or spread out across multiple commissions, so you don’t have to decide on just one dragon to spoil!
Format
Biography style (1st or 3rd): Told from an omniscient (all-knowing) perspective, i.e. you know things the character(s) doesn't. Usually a brief overview of a dragon’s life, rather than individual events, although you can request certain events be described in detail.
Narrative (1st or 3rd): Told like a story, may shift between one or more characters’ perspectives. Limited perspective, meaning you see things through a character’s eyes, which allows for an unreliable narrator. Can be overview or detailed, please specify.
Custom (any): A unique style, e.g. letters, lair descriptions, dialogue. PM me and we can discuss this further, I’m open to try pretty much anything but outright poetry.
If this section is blank, I’ll pick the format that I think is easiest to write your piece in. Sometimes I may even use your order as an excuse to experiment with a new format.
If there’s a certain tone you’d like your piece to have, e.g. light-hearted, humorous, serious, edgy, or angsty, do specify under the Other section. Otherwise, depending on the dragon, I default to light-hearted or edgy. Those are the tones I’m most comfortable with.
Tense
This is pretty minor, since like 80% of my finished examples are in past tense. But if you’d prefer present tense (or future tense???), please specify in the Other section.
Past: was, had, went
Present: is, has, goes Future (???): will
Form (use a new form for each individual order):
Code:
[quote]Hello yes hi @Ethiera, I’d like to order:
[b]Username:[/b]
[b]Character name(s):[/b]
[b]Image Reference/Written description:[/b] (if dragon, use BBCode, if OC, any image/description will do)
[b]Word count:[/b]
[b]Format:[/b]
[b]POV:[/b]
[b]Character/Story Info:[/b]
[b]Payment:[/b]
[b]Other:[/b]
[/quote]
[b]Slots[/b]
1. ScienceOfficer's fluff with OCs
2. Like a dozen 1k word commissions from Techmox
3. Bulk order from Raidye
4. End3rStorm's Rose
5.
[b]Pinglist[/b]
(pinglist here)
[b]Payment options:[/b]
Chances are, you'll be paying for your commission at the aforementioned standard rate of 10kt/10g every 100 words, [s]but during Dom pushes, I'll take fodder according to this chart.[/s] Also feel free to offer any of the items in the wishlist below as partial/full payment:
[b]Wishlist:[/b]
[item=peace dove][item=ragepuff][item=sweetpuff][item=frustrating menagerie][item=box o' faeries]
[item=citrine flourish eye piece] or any colour variation of the [i]eye piece[/i] only.
Items from these outfits, my dragons hunger:
[outfit=180667][outfit=195590][outfit=144771][outfit=237301]
And here we observe Eth's version of the Light Sprite wish:
[skin=17454][skin=17455]
1. ScienceOfficer's fluff with OCs
2. Like a dozen 1k word commissions from Techmox
3. Bulk order from Raidye
4. End3rStorm's Rose
5.
Pinglist
(pinglist here)
Payment options:
Chances are, you'll be paying for your commission at the aforementioned standard rate of 10kt/10g every 100 words, but during Dom pushes, I'll take fodder according to this chart. Also feel free to offer any of the items in the wishlist below as partial/full payment:
Wishlist:
Peace Dove
Apparel
Peace Doves are said to be the only bird that all dragon breeds refuse to eat. Their presence always portends fortune.
1800
Ragepuff
Familiar
Sweetpuff and Ragepuff are actually of the same species. Couples typically consist of one of each disposition; one doting parent, and one ball of protective fury!
1500
Sweetpuff
Familiar
The softest fren.
1500
Frustrating Menagerie
Chests
A cage containing all six tropical migratory birds - a savings of ten percent.
0
Box o' Faeries
Chests
A package containing two swarms of faeries. Includes the Pixie Procession and Ethereal Entourage - a savings of ten percent!
0
Citrine Flourish Eye Piece
Apparel
A finely-wrought citrine eye piece.
1400
or any colour variation of the eye piece only.
Items from these outfits, my dragons hunger:
Bastion of Truth
He Giveth, He Taketh
My Sister's Keeper
Son of Surtr
And here we observe Eth's version of the Light Sprite wish:
Skin: Nightfall Regalia
Skydancer Female Only
Skins are equippable items that can be worn like a coat of paint on top of the skin of your dragon. The look of the skin will not be passed onto offspring and may be unequipped at any time. (Designed by Studio.)
Itemid #17454
Skin: Black Night Regalia
Skydancer Female Only
Skins are equippable items that can be worn like a coat of paint on top of the skin of your dragon. The look of the skin will not be passed onto offspring and may be unequipped at any time. (Designed by Studio.)
[b]FAQ[/b]
[b]Q:[/b] Is this shop affiliated with the main Wind Foddart thread?
[b]A:[/b] For personal reasons, I'd rather not post on the main thread, but the end goal is the same: Wind dominance with help from your fodder!
[b]Q:[/b] Do I send payment now or later?
[b]A:[/b] I take payment once you're satisfied with the finished piece!
[b]Q:[/b] What happens if the order seems to be taking too long?
[b]A:[/b] I admit this is a problem I'm struggling with. If it's been more than 2 weeks without any communication, feel free to metaphorically kick me with a ping or PM!
[b]Q:[/b] Why would you work for the equivalent of 10 cents per 100 words?
[b]A:[/b] [img]http://i.imgur.com/cQwTn93.png[/img]
Q: Is this shop affiliated with the main Wind Foddart thread?
A: For personal reasons, I'd rather not post on the main thread, but the end goal is the same: Wind dominance with help from your fodder!
Q: Do I send payment now or later?
A: I take payment once you're satisfied with the finished piece!
Q: What happens if the order seems to be taking too long?
A: I admit this is a problem I'm struggling with. If it's been more than 2 weeks without any communication, feel free to metaphorically kick me with a ping or PM!
Q: Why would you work for the equivalent of 10 cents per 100 words?
[quote]Hello yes hi @Ethiera, I’d like to order:
[b]Username:[/b] Sumatra
[b]Character name(s):[/b] Iyr
[b]Image Reference/Written description:[/b] [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=33306874]
[img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/350/333069/33306874_350.png[/img]
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[b]Word count:[/b] 525
[b]Format:[/b] Biography*
[b]POV:[/b] 3rd person
[b]Character/Story Info:[/b] Notes in his bio. I haven't decided what his true nature is, beyond the fact that he was once some sort of ancient angelic/demonic being, and I want his past to always remain sort of ambiguous
[b]Payment:[/b] Three fodder dragons at lvl 6, split between this order and the one below (that's 1050 words total, right?)
[b]Other:[/b] *If possible, I'm looking for something that's less a precise description of the dragon's backstory and more...poetic? Something stylistically similar to [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&tab=dragon&id=163655&did=30502742]this dragon's bio[/url] or [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&tab=dragon&id=163655&did=11337360]this one's[/url], if that makes sense.
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[quote][b]Username:[/b] Sumatra
[b]Character name(s):[/b] Shandra
[b]Image Reference/Written description:[/b] [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=33386375]
[img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/350/333864/33386375_350.png[/img]
[/url]
[b]Word count:[/b] 525
[b]Format:[/b] Biography*
[b]POV:[/b] 3rd person
[b]Character/Story Info:[/b] Spoiled wealthy child who ran away from home to pursue adventure, likes picking fights. Additional notes in bio.
[b]Payment:[/b] see above order form
[b]Other:[/b] *Same as above order form
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Username: Sumatra Character name(s): Iyr Image Reference/Written description:
Word count: 525 Format: Biography* POV: 3rd person Character/Story Info: Notes in his bio. I haven't decided what his true nature is, beyond the fact that he was once some sort of ancient angelic/demonic being, and I want his past to always remain sort of ambiguous Payment: Three fodder dragons at lvl 6, split between this order and the one below (that's 1050 words total, right?) Other: *If possible, I'm looking for something that's less a precise description of the dragon's backstory and more...poetic? Something stylistically similar to this dragon's bio or this one's, if that makes sense.
Quote:
Username: Sumatra Character name(s): Shandra Image Reference/Written description:
Word count: 525 Format: Biography* POV: 3rd person Character/Story Info: Spoiled wealthy child who ran away from home to pursue adventure, likes picking fights. Additional notes in bio. Payment: see above order form Other: *Same as above order form
You're in luck, I was actually studying Homer's Iliad and the Poetic Edda the past few days (personal project), so I think I have a good grasp on the poetic style you want. Feel free to send the fodder any time before this battle finishes.
You're in luck, I was actually studying Homer's Iliad and the Poetic Edda the past few days (personal project), so I think I have a good grasp on the poetic style you want. Feel free to send the fodder any time before this battle finishes.
Hmm...well I'm not sure that I'm looking for something in formal verse exactly. It's just that your biography examples tend to be a summary of events and traits, while I'm leaning toward something a bit more emotive than informative. A bit more like this bio you wrote in contrast to this one. That's what I meant; I'm sorry if the word "poetic" was misleading.
Hmm...well I'm not sure that I'm looking for something in formal verse exactly. It's just that your biography examples tend to be a summary of events and traits, while I'm leaning toward something a bit more emotive than informative. A bit more like this bio you wrote in contrast to this one. That's what I meant; I'm sorry if the word "poetic" was misleading.