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TOPIC | Resort Nuzlocke - New Story p51
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@Kizmetto could you add me to the ping list in the meantime tho? :3
I just read all of this in 2 days.... Considering doing this myself XD
@Kizmetto could you add me to the ping list in the meantime tho? :3
I just read all of this in 2 days.... Considering doing this myself XD
No giant marshmallows left uneaten!
@tacothemighty y-you did? the whole lot? what parts did you like/feel sad about? favourite character? owo!!

you definately should, it really made me appreciate each dragon. thank you for reading!
@tacothemighty y-you did? the whole lot? what parts did you like/feel sad about? favourite character? owo!!

you definately should, it really made me appreciate each dragon. thank you for reading!
What!? Noo! I ran out of things to read!!! *falls to floor*
Read all in two days, already on ping list
You make me want to start a nuz
But my dragons are too precious to me, gifts and the like (I'm even keeping a dragons blood line alive as both parents are 'dead' from starvation)
Also... I need a shower... I'll do that now

GREAT STORIES!!!!!!!
What!? Noo! I ran out of things to read!!! *falls to floor*
Read all in two days, already on ping list
You make me want to start a nuz
But my dragons are too precious to me, gifts and the like (I'm even keeping a dragons blood line alive as both parents are 'dead' from starvation)
Also... I need a shower... I'll do that now

GREAT STORIES!!!!!!!
Welcome to the Earth... here we have dirt and rocks for your sitting convenience. Enjoy.
@Kizmetto CORONIA AND FORLOCK MADE ME CRY
Noir's whole saga throughout the Nuzlocke is fascinating, he interacted with every group of dragons and I love how he's sort of a connecting thread!

I might do the baby version, I love my dragons too much. I'm prepping my lore for a split between the militant and non-militant parts of the clan right now actually XD
@Kizmetto CORONIA AND FORLOCK MADE ME CRY
Noir's whole saga throughout the Nuzlocke is fascinating, he interacted with every group of dragons and I love how he's sort of a connecting thread!

I might do the baby version, I love my dragons too much. I'm prepping my lore for a split between the militant and non-militant parts of the clan right now actually XD
No giant marshmallows left uneaten!
Just finished reading everything in... a three hour marathon? Wow....
Add me to the pinglist?
Just finished reading everything in... a three hour marathon? Wow....
Add me to the pinglist?
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Just finished reading everything in... a three hour marathon? Wow....
Add me to the pinglist?
Just finished reading everything in... a three hour marathon? Wow....
Add me to the pinglist?
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@felGS @Tierce @kingdoge @Neige @texandemox @VictoryInSolace @wisecakes @ArgenteaMoon @nindeanwa @Joydom29 @scyras @Sakku @dovalore @Xaldin @Kallastromuel @FlyingNorth @survivors @Antaria @rosemarywood @rookery @spacesnake @bunnykei @kingofeli @Aetherluxumbra @Fluffypuppy77 @TacoTheMighty @skylinecity

Oh and dont be afraid to be asked to be removed from the pinglist, i dont mind :)

Hey all.
Update. Sorry, I'm officially declaring the Noir Saga closed, however those dragons still happily reside with me, and Bucky went to a friend of mine. Thank you all for reading, this was my most popular story definately. If you wanted ask any questions im happy to answer, also if you're not familiar with my clan lore you can find everything here!


Im starting a new nuzlocke. This will be set within the Resort itself and serves as an inside look at life within the resort. This is to build both lore and characters , nuzlocke or not. A new set of characters will be subject to the nuzlocke rules.
Quote:
1. If it dies in coli, it must be sold/exalted.

2. Guardian Charges must be accounted for by 2 months old. (if none is established yet they must leave for their Search.) also i cant just give a charge willy-nilly, gotta give some thought and meaning to it yeah.

3. Gene allocation is this; primary at 10, secondary at 15, tertiary at 20 and accent at 25.

4. Food must be grinded for…But im already quite well off in the food department, i mean they do still live at the Resort, so im gonna ignore this rule. I’ll find a way to compensate somehow, suggestions welcome. I dont really care for the pinkertonlocke rules by the way, but this might be the only compensation in game i can use.
thats pretty much it. Since im so quick for gening dragons , i have to force myself to slow down and ‘earn’ their genes. doing so will probably make me appreciate them more as a whole anyway. Also once gened at all, i probably really dont want them to die aha. Already existing dragons will appear in the story as cameos and npcs, but not featured in the story since they are exempt from nuzlocke rules of coarse. The goal is to get all characters to level 25.

tl dr; starting a new nuzlocke to further develop life within Breezebreak Resort and to get myself writing again. I really enjoy it. Will be tagged as #fr nuzlocke and #kizmettonuzlocke ,and i will post them under read mores. Will also be posted to my nuzlocke thread.
@felGS @Tierce @kingdoge @Neige @texandemox @VictoryInSolace @wisecakes @ArgenteaMoon @nindeanwa @Joydom29 @scyras @Sakku @dovalore @Xaldin @Kallastromuel @FlyingNorth @survivors @Antaria @rosemarywood @rookery @spacesnake @bunnykei @kingofeli @Aetherluxumbra @Fluffypuppy77 @TacoTheMighty @skylinecity

Oh and dont be afraid to be asked to be removed from the pinglist, i dont mind :)

Hey all.
Update. Sorry, I'm officially declaring the Noir Saga closed, however those dragons still happily reside with me, and Bucky went to a friend of mine. Thank you all for reading, this was my most popular story definately. If you wanted ask any questions im happy to answer, also if you're not familiar with my clan lore you can find everything here!


Im starting a new nuzlocke. This will be set within the Resort itself and serves as an inside look at life within the resort. This is to build both lore and characters , nuzlocke or not. A new set of characters will be subject to the nuzlocke rules.
Quote:
1. If it dies in coli, it must be sold/exalted.

2. Guardian Charges must be accounted for by 2 months old. (if none is established yet they must leave for their Search.) also i cant just give a charge willy-nilly, gotta give some thought and meaning to it yeah.

3. Gene allocation is this; primary at 10, secondary at 15, tertiary at 20 and accent at 25.

4. Food must be grinded for…But im already quite well off in the food department, i mean they do still live at the Resort, so im gonna ignore this rule. I’ll find a way to compensate somehow, suggestions welcome. I dont really care for the pinkertonlocke rules by the way, but this might be the only compensation in game i can use.
thats pretty much it. Since im so quick for gening dragons , i have to force myself to slow down and ‘earn’ their genes. doing so will probably make me appreciate them more as a whole anyway. Also once gened at all, i probably really dont want them to die aha. Already existing dragons will appear in the story as cameos and npcs, but not featured in the story since they are exempt from nuzlocke rules of coarse. The goal is to get all characters to level 25.

tl dr; starting a new nuzlocke to further develop life within Breezebreak Resort and to get myself writing again. I really enjoy it. Will be tagged as #fr nuzlocke and #kizmettonuzlocke ,and i will post them under read mores. Will also be posted to my nuzlocke thread.
Looking forwards to seeing how this new story develops! I know I didn't really comment much before but I did enjoy reading through the Noir saga as you updated regularly. Here's hoping you have just as much fun writing as last time and get back into the swing of things again. ♥
Looking forwards to seeing how this new story develops! I know I didn't really comment much before but I did enjoy reading through the Noir saga as you updated regularly. Here's hoping you have just as much fun writing as last time and get back into the swing of things again. ♥
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@Kizmetto cool
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@felGS @Tierce @kingdoge @Neige @texandemox @VictoryInSolace @wisecakes @ArgenteaMoon @nindeanwa @Joydom29 @scyras @Sakku @dovalore @Xaldin @Kallastromuel @FlyingNorth @survivors @Antaria @rosemarywood @rookery @spacesnake @bunnykei @kingofeli @Aetherluxumbra @Fluffypuppy77 @TacoTheMighty @skylinecity [b]Chapter 0 - Lost Document[/b] [img]http://67.media.tumblr.com/a2e43a0278dbcaaf565b8d31afefabd6/tumblr_inline_ocry3oVE1w1snz70d_500.png[/img] There was a frantic scurrying coming from [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=19824719]Lotus[/url]’ office, small nails clacking against the polished floor. “Oh no, oh no…” She whispered, shuffling papers from her table and opening every draw, before slamming them shut out of disgruntlement. “Where is it?!” She cried out, alerting her co-worker, [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=3248651]Soot[/url]. The dark grey coatl sighed once, lifting herself from her low couch. She approached Lotus’ office and peered in, appalled at the mess the younger dragon had made. Her brows furrowed before she inquired with a low voice, “Lotus, dear…Are you having some trouble?” Soot’s tone was uncaring, like she was asking out of obligation, in truth she just wanted to find the source of the noise and silence it. The crimson dragon laden in gold whipped her head around when her name was mentioned, crest flared and sweat visibly beading on her forehead. “Yes! I can’t find the defence documents!” Her chest heaved as she panted slightly, her tongue flickering in and out, the lanterns that were strung on her wings jingling slightly. “Lotus.. Why don’t I have Itzel come take a look? She is my personal assistant…” Soot suggested, not delaying a moment and leaving the room. You can hear a sharp whistle and a pounding of claws, then the appearance of a [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=24350401]green and orange skydancer[/url]. “Yes Lady Soot?” She asked, not making eye contact. “Help Lotus find the defence report. I can’t stand the noise she’s making..” She groaned, returning to her lounging couch and laying back down, beginning to preen herself. The skydancer nodded and entered the Office, “Miss Lotus! Have you tried looking in the library?” Lotus stared at her like she asked the most ridiculous question, dumbfounded. “No.. No I haven’t tried that.” She admitted, and scurried off towards the library. She passed by several guests who greeted her, which she nodded and smiled quickly, no time to idle! Down the hall and around the hall, she quickly made it to her prideful library. It was massive, large bookcases to the roof, filled to the brim with books, scrolls and parchments from all around Sorineth. There were a few dragons occupying booths and tables, faces buried in tales of bards and history books of Arcanist. The library had soft lanterns decorating the shelves, glass bottles filled with embers that constantly burned, they smelt slightly of charcoal. Lotus quickly found who she what she was looking for, the staff area. Old Reports were often documented and processed here, so maybe it was prematurely placed here. Sitting back on her hind legs, she started to filter through the filing cabinet. By sheer luck, she did find the missing document. “Yes!” She cheered, only to be hushed by everyone in range. Embarrassed, the coatl lowered her crest and skulked out of the library, mouthing the words ‘sorry’ over and over. Back in her office, it was now neat and tidy, Itzel had taken the initiative to clean up and re-file all the documents the frantic coatl had made. “You found it?” she chimed, smiling at her as she closed the last cabinet. “Yes! I did, thank you for cleaning all this up, i..I know I made a big mess.” Lotus sighed, smiling up at the secretary. “Do you need any more help, Miss Lotus?” She asked, and the other dragon shook their head. “No, thank you Itzel.” Sitting down at her office, her eyes scanned over the dates and names of all the dragons that had visited the Resort in the last 6 months, looking for an obscurity. She caught wind that the Resort has had some shady dragons ‘visiting’ her Resort, illicit drugs being passed around and other small crimes being committed on her grounds. If public got whiff of this, it could be bad news for business. Page after page seemed clear, before Soot spoke up again. “If a criminal entered our territory, why would they show up on the report? They would not have ‘checked in’ Lotus.” She stated matter-of-factly. She was right of course, that’s why she was the overseer. Lotus frowned, “What can I do?” She looked up at the other coatl, who flicked a stray red feather out of her face. “Well…I have a contact from my own colony, perhaps we should seriously consider a military for-“ “No! We are a peaceful clan, a place of calm serenity and relaxation…” “- Okay, a defence unit. A few dragons to just patrol the Resort, a bit of bulk.” Her eyes flashed, remembering how prominent her previous home was when it came to invaders. She watched Lotus contemplate this, when she added “It would make the Resort safer overall. What if marauders decided they want the Resort for their own? We are on prime property and have a pretty good hold on the holiday market. Why wouldn’t some dragon want this for themselves?” “..Okay.” Lotus finally said, “Who did you have in mind?”
@felGS @Tierce @kingdoge @Neige @texandemox @VictoryInSolace @wisecakes @ArgenteaMoon @nindeanwa @Joydom29 @scyras @Sakku @dovalore @Xaldin @Kallastromuel @FlyingNorth @survivors @Antaria @rosemarywood @rookery @spacesnake @bunnykei @kingofeli @Aetherluxumbra @Fluffypuppy77 @TacoTheMighty @skylinecity

Chapter 0 - Lost Document

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There was a frantic scurrying coming from Lotus’ office, small nails clacking against the polished floor. “Oh no, oh no…” She whispered, shuffling papers from her table and opening every draw, before slamming them shut out of disgruntlement. “Where is it?!” She cried out, alerting her co-worker, Soot. The dark grey coatl sighed once, lifting herself from her low couch. She approached Lotus’ office and peered in, appalled at the mess the younger dragon had made. Her brows furrowed before she inquired with a low voice, “Lotus, dear…Are you having some trouble?” Soot’s tone was uncaring, like she was asking out of obligation, in truth she just wanted to find the source of the noise and silence it.

The crimson dragon laden in gold whipped her head around when her name was mentioned, crest flared and sweat visibly beading on her forehead. “Yes! I can’t find the defence documents!” Her chest heaved as she panted slightly, her tongue flickering in and out, the lanterns that were strung on her wings jingling slightly. “Lotus.. Why don’t I have Itzel come take a look? She is my personal assistant…” Soot suggested, not delaying a moment and leaving the room. You can hear a sharp whistle and a pounding of claws, then the appearance of a green and orange skydancer. “Yes Lady Soot?” She asked, not making eye contact. “Help Lotus find the defence report. I can’t stand the noise she’s making..” She groaned, returning to her lounging couch and laying back down, beginning to preen herself. The skydancer nodded and entered the Office, “Miss Lotus! Have you tried looking in the library?”

Lotus stared at her like she asked the most ridiculous question, dumbfounded. “No.. No I haven’t tried that.” She admitted, and scurried off towards the library. She passed by several guests who greeted her, which she nodded and smiled quickly, no time to idle! Down the hall and around the hall, she quickly made it to her prideful library. It was massive, large bookcases to the roof, filled to the brim with books, scrolls and parchments from all around Sorineth. There were a few dragons occupying booths and tables, faces buried in tales of bards and history books of Arcanist. The library had soft lanterns decorating the shelves, glass bottles filled with embers that constantly burned, they smelt slightly of charcoal. Lotus quickly found who she what she was looking for, the staff area. Old Reports were often documented and processed here, so maybe it was prematurely placed here. Sitting back on her hind legs, she started to filter through the filing cabinet. By sheer luck, she did find the missing document. “Yes!” She cheered, only to be hushed by everyone in range. Embarrassed, the coatl lowered her crest and skulked out of the library, mouthing the words ‘sorry’ over and over.

Back in her office, it was now neat and tidy, Itzel had taken the initiative to clean up and re-file all the documents the frantic coatl had made. “You found it?” she chimed, smiling at her as she closed the last cabinet. “Yes! I did, thank you for cleaning all this up, i..I know I made a big mess.” Lotus sighed, smiling up at the secretary. “Do you need any more help, Miss Lotus?” She asked, and the other dragon shook their head. “No, thank you Itzel.”

Sitting down at her office, her eyes scanned over the dates and names of all the dragons that had visited the Resort in the last 6 months, looking for an obscurity. She caught wind that the Resort has had some shady dragons ‘visiting’ her Resort, illicit drugs being passed around and other small crimes being committed on her grounds. If public got whiff of this, it could be bad news for business. Page after page seemed clear, before Soot spoke up again. “If a criminal entered our territory, why would they show up on the report? They would not have ‘checked in’ Lotus.” She stated matter-of-factly. She was right of course, that’s why she was the overseer. Lotus frowned, “What can I do?” She looked up at the other coatl, who flicked a stray red feather out of her face. “Well…I have a contact from my own colony, perhaps we should seriously consider a military for-“

“No! We are a peaceful clan, a place of calm serenity and relaxation…”

“- Okay, a defence unit. A few dragons to just patrol the Resort, a bit of bulk.” Her eyes flashed, remembering how prominent her previous home was when it came to invaders. She watched Lotus contemplate this, when she added “It would make the Resort safer overall. What if marauders decided they want the Resort for their own? We are on prime property and have a pretty good hold on the holiday market. Why wouldn’t some dragon want this for themselves?”

“..Okay.” Lotus finally said, “Who did you have in mind?”
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