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I like their interaction~ :3

I hope you get well soon! And yes, lots of nuzlockes, it's amazing xD
I like their interaction~ :3

I hope you get well soon! And yes, lots of nuzlockes, it's amazing xD
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@felGS @Tierce @kingdoge @Neige @texandemox @VictoryInSolace @wisecakes @ArgenteaMoon Entry Fifteen Garrik returned to his cavern, in which he shared with his hatch-mate Sonata. Half the room was adorned with bones and tusks, where on his half of the room, was covered with leaflets and papers. Covered in etchings and drawings, thoughts and ideas. He was the thinker in this brothership. Sonata stormed into the room not long after the Tundra, and he was soaked with blood and had the most devillish look on his face. "I had a great time!" He hissed, kneading and laying down on his bone hoard. Garrik stared at his brother, he had grown more muted in colours over the past few days and his bat familiars always stood close. The cracks in the roof of their room were home to many bats, and the cursed bats and the runic bats. Sonata started to look like a Runic Bat! [center][img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/350/77121/7712022_350.png[/img][/center] Garrik shifted slightly and glanced at his paws, then back at his brother. His firey eyes reflected the passion he shared for battling, claws shredding through flesh. He stood up and without breaking eye contact with his brother, approached him. Stopping just before his bone hoard, he held out his claw, expecting Sonata to do the same. They were always together, so the Mirror knew what Garrik meant. "What are you even up to thissss time Garrik?" He quipped, handing his his claw. It was still blood soaked, but dried. Garrik grasped his brothers claw and grabbed a sharp tusk on the ground. He gouged it deep enough to leave a scar on his own paw, before handing the tusk to his brother. His own firey eyes shared that passion, and they were brothers by nature - now they would become blood brothers. Sonata hissed slightly, but grabbed the tusk and gouged his own hand. Blood rose to the surface of both bloody claws as they shook each other firmly, the blood spreading between them. The ritual was over and Garrik grinned at his brother, it was rare to see him smile, let alone grin. Sonata felt a little uneasy, but grinned back never the less, recoiling his bloody claw. Lapping at it, Garrik returned to his side of the room and pressing his bloody claw to some parchment. What was he up to? ---- Voltaic huffed and returned to the craggy lair. He stomped into the lower levels and into the seering room - the room with the lake in the middle. It was illuminated with soft flames and the lake was still. He peered in and saw a scowl upon his face. He took a deep breath, in and out, before laying down and resting his claws in the cool water. Garrik was an adolescent, it's just a phase. "He will grow out of it." He murmured to himself, flicking the water slightly. He coiled his tail around him as he continued to think to himself. Not long after, The ridgeback returned. She seemed bothered by something and peered into Voltaics room, neither Voltaic nor Coronia was there. She stepped into her own room, empty without Noir. They must still be out... Her thoughts returned to the Mirrors behavior today. Troubled, she seeked the seering room. A large familiar spring guardian was already there, and it looked like he was deep in thought too. Sliding next to him, she rested her head on his shoulders. "You seem troubled. Do share." She insisted, and the guardian sighed. He turned to face her and proceeded to tell her all about Garrik. Maggie nodded and frowned, then retelling her day with Sonata. "Perhaps those two should not be so close." MBoss suggested, in which Voltaic retorted with "But that may make them want to hunt more." "They need restriction." "They need guidance." "You do not have their respect." "...I will earn it from them." he huffed, getting worked up again. The ridgeback rubbed her face against his softly, trying to be affectionate. She saw the hatchlings do so, and she was recalled back to her own hatchling days. Voltaic did calm down, and he stared up at the Ridgeback. "You know just how to calm me down..." He trailed off, shifting his weight slightly. Arching his back, he reached behind his opposite wing and pulled out the now slightly tarnished Diamond Ring. "I found this long ago...I have been saving it." Voltaic's voice was soft and he fumbled with it for a moment. "I knew it would be a nice addition to any hoard, and I hope..You would accept it. My [b][i]Charge[/i][/b]." He lifted his head as he said the last bit, staring at her with intent. He had been thinking about this for the past few weeks, and the feelings only grew stronger each day. She had to know! This spring guardian had finally found his Charge. Maggie shifted back slightly, taken back by the statement. She purred slightly, taking the diamond ring from him. "I am your charge? That is a once in a life time thing for Guardians. You are sure??" She questioned, a little embarrassed. But it was sweet, she had strong feelings for the male, even if she had raised him from hatching. "Yes. I am certain." The ridgeback nestled into Voltaic more and the duo lay like that for quite some time, admiring the lights in the Seering Room, the cool lake and each others company. After a while, Maggies' mind drifted back to the current status of the Clan. She whispered to the Guardian, "I am able to bear children soon." and left it at that, purring a little harder as she blushed. If they were able to have a successful nest, their lair might be big enough to eventually divide into sections, and thus ensuring a larger clan and more blood to mix, to allow for even further expansions. ---- Later that night, Garrik snuck out.
@felGS @Tierce @kingdoge @Neige @texandemox @VictoryInSolace @wisecakes @ArgenteaMoon

Entry Fifteen

Garrik returned to his cavern, in which he shared with his hatch-mate Sonata. Half the room was adorned with bones and tusks, where on his half of the room, was covered with leaflets and papers. Covered in etchings and drawings, thoughts and ideas. He was the thinker in this brothership. Sonata stormed into the room not long after the Tundra, and he was soaked with blood and had the most devillish look on his face. "I had a great time!" He hissed, kneading and laying down on his bone hoard. Garrik stared at his brother, he had grown more muted in colours over the past few days and his bat familiars always stood close. The cracks in the roof of their room were home to many bats, and the cursed bats and the runic bats. Sonata started to look like a Runic Bat!
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Garrik shifted slightly and glanced at his paws, then back at his brother. His firey eyes reflected the passion he shared for battling, claws shredding through flesh. He stood up and without breaking eye contact with his brother, approached him. Stopping just before his bone hoard, he held out his claw, expecting Sonata to do the same. They were always together, so the Mirror knew what Garrik meant. "What are you even up to thissss time Garrik?" He quipped, handing his his claw. It was still blood soaked, but dried. Garrik grasped his brothers claw and grabbed a sharp tusk on the ground. He gouged it deep enough to leave a scar on his own paw, before handing the tusk to his brother. His own firey eyes shared that passion, and they were brothers by nature - now they would become blood brothers. Sonata hissed slightly, but grabbed the tusk and gouged his own hand. Blood rose to the surface of both bloody claws as they shook each other firmly, the blood spreading between them.

The ritual was over and Garrik grinned at his brother, it was rare to see him smile, let alone grin. Sonata felt a little uneasy, but grinned back never the less, recoiling his bloody claw. Lapping at it, Garrik returned to his side of the room and pressing his bloody claw to some parchment.

What was he up to?

----

Voltaic huffed and returned to the craggy lair. He stomped into the lower levels and into the seering room - the room with the lake in the middle. It was illuminated with soft flames and the lake was still. He peered in and saw a scowl upon his face. He took a deep breath, in and out, before laying down and resting his claws in the cool water. Garrik was an adolescent, it's just a phase. "He will grow out of it." He murmured to himself, flicking the water slightly. He coiled his tail around him as he continued to think to himself.

Not long after, The ridgeback returned. She seemed bothered by something and peered into Voltaics room, neither Voltaic nor Coronia was there. She stepped into her own room, empty without Noir. They must still be out... Her thoughts returned to the Mirrors behavior today. Troubled, she seeked the seering room. A large familiar spring guardian was already there, and it looked like he was deep in thought too. Sliding next to him, she rested her head on his shoulders. "You seem troubled. Do share." She insisted, and the guardian sighed. He turned to face her and proceeded to tell her all about Garrik.

Maggie nodded and frowned, then retelling her day with Sonata.

"Perhaps those two should not be so close." MBoss suggested, in which Voltaic retorted with "But that may make them want to hunt more."

"They need restriction."

"They need guidance."

"You do not have their respect."

"...I will earn it from them." he huffed, getting worked up again.

The ridgeback rubbed her face against his softly, trying to be affectionate. She saw the hatchlings do so, and she was recalled back to her own hatchling days. Voltaic did calm down, and he stared up at the Ridgeback. "You know just how to calm me down..." He trailed off, shifting his weight slightly. Arching his back, he reached behind his opposite wing and pulled out the now slightly tarnished Diamond Ring.

"I found this long ago...I have been saving it." Voltaic's voice was soft and he fumbled with it for a moment. "I knew it would be a nice addition to any hoard, and I hope..You would accept it. My Charge." He lifted his head as he said the last bit, staring at her with intent. He had been thinking about this for the past few weeks, and the feelings only grew stronger each day. She had to know! This spring guardian had finally found his Charge.

Maggie shifted back slightly, taken back by the statement. She purred slightly, taking the diamond ring from him. "I am your charge? That is a once in a life time thing for Guardians. You are sure??" She questioned, a little embarrassed. But it was sweet, she had strong feelings for the male, even if she had raised him from hatching.

"Yes. I am certain."

The ridgeback nestled into Voltaic more and the duo lay like that for quite some time, admiring the lights in the Seering Room, the cool lake and each others company.

After a while, Maggies' mind drifted back to the current status of the Clan. She whispered to the Guardian, "I am able to bear children soon." and left it at that, purring a little harder as she blushed. If they were able to have a successful nest, their lair might be big enough to eventually divide into sections, and thus ensuring a larger clan and more blood to mix, to allow for even further expansions.

----

Later that night, Garrik snuck out.
@Kizmetto

Kyaaa~ Maggie and Voltaic, so cute~ *o*

Hmm... what is Garrik up to...
@Kizmetto

Kyaaa~ Maggie and Voltaic, so cute~ *o*

Hmm... what is Garrik up to...
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Indeed what IS he up to...
Indeed what IS he up to...
OH NO A LOVE STORY IS BREWING OMG


REST IN PIECES MY HEART
OH NO A LOVE STORY IS BREWING OMG


REST IN PIECES MY HEART
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@felGS @Tierce @kingdoge @Neige @texandemox @VictoryInSolace @wisecakes @ArgenteaMoon Entry Sixteen A week has passed, Garrik was still gone, and Noir and Coronia had since returned from their venture to the border of Sunbeam Ruins. Coronia was an adolescent now, the youngest of the clan. He was very adamant in the artefacts he chose to wear, [center][img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/350/77671/7767000_350.png[/img][/center] He was certainly the oddest, none of the apparel he chose had any utility what so ever. "Noir! What do you think?"He muffled from the aztec mask, Noir chuckled slightly and pawed the others face, causing him to tumble over. "Pretty stupid if you ask me!" The black guardian stared back out of the lair, he was doing this a lot as of late. He felt something, He loved his family - but there was something calling out to him. Noir had an urge to explore, to see what else there is in the world. What was this feeling? He stared at his blotched scales, and noticed they were spreading to his wings - though it was still faint. MBoss and Voltaic were always together, they did hunt occasionally, but their minds seemed to be distracted else where. They would always go off for hours on end, and come back exhausted - but without any food nor loot to show for it. What were they doing? When they were at the lair, they were out the back, digging out a new room. They started to move parts of their own rooms into this new room. Noir decided to go see what the fuss about this new room was. It was towards the back of the cave, and turned quite sharply upwards. Certainly hidden from any sneaking predators who dare enter the lair. Trying as hard as he could to be quiet - he felt the need to sneak- he made it into the new room. In the center was a circular formation of twigs, wire and rods. "A Nest!" He exclaimed, excitement piquing his voice. A low rumble came from behind and a smiling Voltaic slid in. "Yes..It is a nest. Maggie and I..."He trailed off, shaking his head as he smiled, "We will have our first hatching in the lair soon. She is not pregnant yet but...Oh Stormcatcher will bless us soon i am sure." The spring guardian chuckled, his voice was rather aloof and he was much less serious than before. Lovesick? Noir nodded, before he really thought about it. Everyone here apart from MBoss was an orphan - to have actual born children is a feat in itself, and those dragons will have the chance of survival. "That is pretty cool news I guess.." Noir trailed off, slinking back to his spot just outside the lair proximity to daze off into space, now that his curiosity was sated. He kept staring south. ---- "Brother! Where are you!"Sonata hissed, dashing through the fields, He had left without a trace, after their blood pact. Did he do something wrong? "How dare he, leave without even letting me know." His crests flattened as he continued to dash along blindly, clueless. He made it to the Forgotten Cave, before he decided it was too dangerous even for someone as formidable as himself to go in alone. "Garrik.." The Mirror strode over to a nearby river to lap a drink, when the full moon above him clearly reflected him. His icey body, lined with thin silver waves across his torso started to form. "Ssso thisss isss what Voltaic meant..." He mused to himself, noting his body adapting before his very eyes. He returned to the Lair, disheartened and said nothing to his elders. His only concern was for his brother. The elders did not seem to care, have they even tried looking for him? Did they even care that he was gone? That fool for a guardian is so painfully in love that perhaps he has lost his touch. Where was the leadership - where was this clan even going? Every day is the same, gather food and don't die. What is the point in living? There is no ambition! No Dreams. "Thisss clan isss not for me. I Need to find Garrik."
@felGS @Tierce @kingdoge @Neige @texandemox @VictoryInSolace @wisecakes @ArgenteaMoon

Entry Sixteen

A week has passed, Garrik was still gone, and Noir and Coronia had since returned from their venture to the border of Sunbeam Ruins. Coronia was an adolescent now, the youngest of the clan.

He was very adamant in the artefacts he chose to wear,
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He was certainly the oddest, none of the apparel he chose had any utility what so ever. "Noir! What do you think?"He muffled from the aztec mask, Noir chuckled slightly and pawed the others face, causing him to tumble over. "Pretty stupid if you ask me!" The black guardian stared back out of the lair, he was doing this a lot as of late.

He felt something, He loved his family - but there was something calling out to him. Noir had an urge to explore, to see what else there is in the world. What was this feeling?
He stared at his blotched scales, and noticed they were spreading to his wings - though it was still faint.

MBoss and Voltaic were always together, they did hunt occasionally, but their minds seemed to be distracted else where. They would always go off for hours on end, and come back exhausted - but without any food nor loot to show for it. What were they doing? When they were at the lair, they were out the back, digging out a new room. They started to move parts of their own rooms into this new room. Noir decided to go see what the fuss about this new room was.

It was towards the back of the cave, and turned quite sharply upwards. Certainly hidden from any sneaking predators who dare enter the lair. Trying as hard as he could to be quiet - he felt the need to sneak- he made it into the new room. In the center was a circular formation of twigs, wire and rods. "A Nest!" He exclaimed, excitement piquing his voice. A low rumble came from behind and a smiling Voltaic slid in. "Yes..It is a nest. Maggie and I..."He trailed off, shaking his head as he smiled, "We will have our first hatching in the lair soon. She is not pregnant yet but...Oh Stormcatcher will bless us soon i am sure." The spring guardian chuckled, his voice was rather aloof and he was much less serious than before.

Lovesick?

Noir nodded, before he really thought about it. Everyone here apart from MBoss was an orphan - to have actual born children is a feat in itself, and those dragons will have the chance of survival. "That is pretty cool news I guess.." Noir trailed off, slinking back to his spot just outside the lair proximity to daze off into space, now that his curiosity was sated. He kept staring south.

----

"Brother! Where are you!"Sonata hissed, dashing through the fields, He had left without a trace, after their blood pact. Did he do something wrong? "How dare he, leave without even letting me know." His crests flattened as he continued to dash along blindly, clueless. He made it to the Forgotten Cave, before he decided it was too dangerous even for someone as formidable as himself to go in alone. "Garrik.." The Mirror strode over to a nearby river to lap a drink, when the full moon above him clearly reflected him. His icey body, lined with thin silver waves across his torso started to form. "Ssso thisss isss what Voltaic meant..." He mused to himself, noting his body adapting before his very eyes. He returned to the Lair, disheartened and said nothing to his elders. His only concern was for his brother. The elders did not seem to care, have they even tried looking for him? Did they even care that he was gone?

That fool for a guardian is so painfully in love that perhaps he has lost his touch. Where was the leadership - where was this clan even going? Every day is the same, gather food and don't die. What is the point in living? There is no ambition! No Dreams.

"Thisss clan isss not for me. I Need to find Garrik."
@Kizmetto Coronia looks even better than ever! what a gorgeous tundra!
Also oh dear things be falling apart: Noir wants to run off, and the Fire boys are going AWOL also! My where will it all gooooooo?

(Also I've noticed the Nuzlockes I follow all seem to update around the same time? Do you all go, "oh look, that Nuzlocke has updated, I better update mine too"?)
@Kizmetto Coronia looks even better than ever! what a gorgeous tundra!
Also oh dear things be falling apart: Noir wants to run off, and the Fire boys are going AWOL also! My where will it all gooooooo?

(Also I've noticed the Nuzlockes I follow all seem to update around the same time? Do you all go, "oh look, that Nuzlocke has updated, I better update mine too"?)
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@ArgenteaMoon

Im super excited to get Coronia to level 10! (I plan to get Crystal for him...far away from that goal though.) Noir is at that age where all Guardians want to find their Charge!
Dem fire bros. Im really excited about their plot so to speak.
Yes this lair is getting a little chaotic isnt it? They noticed that too ;)

HM yeah you're right! I am just so excited after rollover so i do all my dailies (to see if there is anything to write about, cool loot or egg findings etc) and then get to writing.
@ArgenteaMoon

Im super excited to get Coronia to level 10! (I plan to get Crystal for him...far away from that goal though.) Noir is at that age where all Guardians want to find their Charge!
Dem fire bros. Im really excited about their plot so to speak.
Yes this lair is getting a little chaotic isnt it? They noticed that too ;)

HM yeah you're right! I am just so excited after rollover so i do all my dailies (to see if there is anything to write about, cool loot or egg findings etc) and then get to writing.
@Kizmetto the worst bit is every time a Nuzlocke updates, I really wanna start posting mine, but I have to get the remainders of the old clan out of my lair, and also since Shianzar (my gen 1) enters the story as an adult I kinda have to wait until he grows up - although I admit I have the first two posts written, and I really should just give up and exalt.
@Kizmetto the worst bit is every time a Nuzlocke updates, I really wanna start posting mine, but I have to get the remainders of the old clan out of my lair, and also since Shianzar (my gen 1) enters the story as an adult I kinda have to wait until he grows up - although I admit I have the first two posts written, and I really should just give up and exalt.
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I live for memes
@ArgenteaMoon

I made soooooo much money exalting my lair, paid for over 3 eggs, and like 1 gene. If you are getting impatient like i did, exalting is the way to go (Y) (It was also Lightning Profit Push week so it worked out well there)

Oh! Man i cant wait to read yours!

Welp i just put $20 on my FR account and just bought two genes. My gems.... Time to keep levelling so i can apply these pretty genes *_*

Edit: I just bought a ripple scroll too. back to 30k in the vault. Maybe i should try the fairgrounds sometime..
@ArgenteaMoon

I made soooooo much money exalting my lair, paid for over 3 eggs, and like 1 gene. If you are getting impatient like i did, exalting is the way to go (Y) (It was also Lightning Profit Push week so it worked out well there)

Oh! Man i cant wait to read yours!

Welp i just put $20 on my FR account and just bought two genes. My gems.... Time to keep levelling so i can apply these pretty genes *_*

Edit: I just bought a ripple scroll too. back to 30k in the vault. Maybe i should try the fairgrounds sometime..
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