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TOPIC | Nuzlocke: A Glimpse Into the Past
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Well! I've decided to make myself a nuzlocke page in my lair! Here we have Ezrulie, our main protagonist in my story, A lonely tundra in a strange time! and soon to be many adventures! [center][img]https://40.media.tumblr.com/f28f6c1eb91a27c480cb24f5021996db/tumblr_nilpx3xLhl1u698wso1_400.png[/img][/center] [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=5470085] [img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/350/54701/5470085_350.png[/img] [/url] So, I am doing a baby version of nuzlocke, as I've spent too many man ours to exalt all my pretties. Feel free to comment! my writing style may not be the best, grammar is a bit bad and spelling.. well it outright sucks. but that's why you keep writing, to improve, right? Anyway! onto the story! Summery: A lone Tundra has been lost in time, his memories clouded and all by himself.. till he -tripped- over a new companion! [quote] [center]Pinglist[/center] Kaial, Scyras, ArgenteaMoon, Keridwyn, Antaria,Elzerei,Glorious[/quote] [quote][u][b]Surviving Clan members[/b][/u] [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&id=47521&tab=dragon&did=5470085]Erzulie[/url]:[img]http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y168/Keltera/Mini%20dragons/5470085_zpsygozbxup.png[/img] [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&tab=dragon&id=47521&did=9030486]Mirage[/url]:[img]http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y168/Keltera/Mini%20dragons/9030486_zps1csshpmh.png[/img] [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&tab=dragon&id=47521&did=9047347]Airon[/url]:[img]http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y168/Keltera/Mini%20dragons/9047347_zpse8bcyfx4.png[/img] [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&tab=dragon&id=47521&did=9236181]Ranol[/url]:[img]http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y168/Keltera/Mini%20dragons/9236181_zpsnopcy7ke.png[/img][url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&id=47521&tab=dragon&did=9579818]Reese[/url]:[img]http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y168/Keltera/Mini%20dragons/9579818_zpsl3uqpmkp.png[/img] [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&id=47521&tab=dragon&did=10057799]Saria[/url]:[img]http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y168/Keltera/Mini%20dragons/10057799_zpsduxldqtr.png[/img] [/quote] [b][u]Deceased Clan Members[/u][/b] Luna, Crinn Eggs found : 4 Eggs pruchased: 2 Deaths: 1 WARNING: Only click this link if you don't mind being spoiled! I am gong to post the progress of my nuzlocke[url=http://crystalnootdragons.tumblr.com/NP] HERE[/url], that means, before the story is written![u][/u]
Well! I've decided to make myself a nuzlocke page in my lair!

Here we have Ezrulie, our main protagonist in my story, A lonely tundra in a strange time! and soon to be many adventures!
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So, I am doing a baby version of nuzlocke, as I've spent too many man ours to exalt all my pretties.

Feel free to comment! my writing style may not be the best, grammar is a bit bad and spelling.. well it outright sucks. but that's why you keep writing, to improve, right?
Anyway! onto the story!


Summery:

A lone Tundra has been lost in time, his memories clouded and all by himself.. till he -tripped- over a new companion!
Quote:
Pinglist
Kaial, Scyras, ArgenteaMoon, Keridwyn, Antaria,Elzerei,Glorious

Quote:
Surviving Clan members
Erzulie:5470085_zpsygozbxup.png Mirage:9030486_zps1csshpmh.png Airon:9047347_zpse8bcyfx4.png
Ranol:9236181_zpsnopcy7ke.pngReese:9579818_zpsl3uqpmkp.png Saria:10057799_zpsduxldqtr.png

Deceased Clan Members
Luna, Crinn

Eggs found : 4
Eggs pruchased: 2
Deaths: 1

WARNING: Only click this link if you don't mind being spoiled! I am gong to post the progress of my nuzlocke HERE, that means, before the story is written!
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[center]Entry #1[/center] Water. That was the first this he could remember, waking up with a mouth full of salty sea water and his fur soaked and clinging to him. Never mind that this -old- memory was only a few seconds old but it was the farthest he could even remember. Ezrulie coughed and sputtered as he swam to the shore with the assistance of the waves lapping behind him. It took only a few moments before his claws touched sand and so he was walking up onto the shore. He shook, his fur sticking out at odd angles and still soaked, his mind dreading how long it was going to take to dry and groom it properly. But first and foremost, he needed to find out where he was. The tundra glanced around, a frown on his lips as he sat in the wet sand “well.. this is useless..” he groaned. Nothing was familiar... nothing at all. The area was desolate.. a small amount of mushrooms were growing around in the soil the met with the same.. dark, almost purple soil. It gave off an eerie feeling of dread.. the fear of the dark creeping in the back of his mind as he sniffed the air. “Stay by the water..” he murmured to himself as he decided to start walking along the damp shoreline. His mind was fuzzy, uncertain. He knew his name.. what he was, what to eat, the basics. But everything else was not coming to him, where had he come from? Where was he? And why was he here? Perhaps if he stayed by the shore and kept walking in one direction he would find something, maybe.. someone..? He had no idea. He had been walking for an hour, still along the shore when he tripped on something half burred in the sand, tumbling head first. Now, with a face full of sand he growl and picked himself back up, determined to kick whatever he had tripped over in a moment of anger. He raised a back foot, ready to send it flying when he paused at the sound of a crack from the small oblong shape covered in barnacles. He lowers his head to sniff, making a face at the strong fishy smell that followed. “What..” There was a chirp, and suddenly a foot pushed through form the inside of the shell. [img]http://i.imgur.com/KbthmLg.png[/img] Erzulie's eyes widened as he watched the hatchling crawl from its barnacle encrusted egg and flop on its back with a bit of a squeal. “You have -got- to be kidding me..” He looked up, searching for any other dragons that might be near by, but judging by the amount of sand around the egg, it had been here for some time. There was a brief moment of panic, fleeing had crossed his mind, but that would doom this little thing. He sighed and sat down in the sand once more “well.. it looks like I am stuck with you” The small mirror girl was still on her back, blinking blue eyes up at the furry tundra who now spoke to her before she giggled and rolled over onto her stomach. It took her a moment to get to her feet with, with assistance and she bumped her nose against the dirty wet fur with a bit of a happy rumble from her chest.
Entry #1

Water.

That was the first this he could remember, waking up with a mouth full of salty sea water and his fur soaked and clinging to him. Never mind that this -old- memory was only a few seconds old but it was the farthest he could even remember.

Ezrulie coughed and sputtered as he swam to the shore with the assistance of the waves lapping behind him. It took only a few moments before his claws touched sand and so he was walking up onto the shore. He shook, his fur sticking out at odd angles and still soaked, his mind dreading how long it was going to take to dry and groom it properly. But first and foremost, he needed to find out where he was.

The tundra glanced around, a frown on his lips as he sat in the wet sand “well.. this is useless..” he groaned. Nothing was familiar... nothing at all. The area was desolate.. a small amount of mushrooms were growing around in the soil the met with the same.. dark, almost purple soil. It gave off an eerie feeling of dread.. the fear of the dark creeping in the back of his mind as he sniffed the air.

“Stay by the water..” he murmured to himself as he decided to start walking along the damp shoreline. His mind was fuzzy, uncertain. He knew his name.. what he was, what to eat, the basics. But everything else was not coming to him, where had he come from? Where was he? And why was he here? Perhaps if he stayed by the shore and kept walking in one direction he would find something, maybe.. someone..?

He had no idea.

He had been walking for an hour, still along the shore when he tripped on something half burred in the sand, tumbling head first. Now, with a face full of sand he growl and picked himself back up, determined to kick whatever he had tripped over in a moment of anger. He raised a back foot, ready to send it flying when he paused at the sound of a crack from the small oblong shape covered in barnacles. He lowers his head to sniff, making a face at the strong fishy smell that followed. “What..” There was a chirp, and suddenly a foot pushed through form the inside of the shell.
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Erzulie's eyes widened as he watched the hatchling crawl from its barnacle encrusted egg and flop on its back with a bit of a squeal. “You have -got- to be kidding me..” He looked up, searching for any other dragons that might be near by, but judging by the amount of sand around the egg, it had been here for some time. There was a brief moment of panic, fleeing had crossed his mind, but that would doom this little thing. He sighed and sat down in the sand once more “well.. it looks like I am stuck with you”

The small mirror girl was still on her back, blinking blue eyes up at the furry tundra who now spoke to her before she giggled and rolled over onto her stomach. It took her a moment to get to her feet with, with assistance and she bumped her nose against the dirty wet fur with a bit of a happy rumble from her chest.
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@Altrntvevil Please add me to your pinglist. :) Inconvenient mirror hatchlings are my favorite hatchlings.
@Altrntvevil Please add me to your pinglist. :) Inconvenient mirror hatchlings are my favorite hatchlings.
I'm doing a Nuzlocke story called The Guardians of Coldspring. You can read it on FR or on tumblr: leir-rising.tumblr.com. Comments and feedback are always welcome.
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@Scyras added!
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Second entry already
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Entry #2

Erzulie had decided to call her Luna, something about how her scales shined in the moonlight of their first night together under the stars. She had slept beside him, curled up against his side. It felt familiar.. like an echo of a memory of a forgotten past. He sighed softly and shook his head, it seemed an echo was all he was going to get.

He groomed himself as she slept, trying not to disturb the infant mirror as he tried to brought his claws through the dirty matted and salt encrusted fur. It would not be done properly till he found a supply of fresh water to wast the salt out of his fur and dry properly. But there was another problem, they needed food, and shelter. He could hear things during the night, calls and shrieks, deeper inland and got little sleep because of it.

Come first light he carefully nudged at the sleeping mirror. “Time to wake, Luna.. we need to get moving.” The mirror stirred, whining lightly and rolled over to face the other way, trying to ignore him and go back to sleep and the tundra sighed. “come on, on your feet, if you want breakfast, I need to go look for some, and I cant leave you out in the open”

Once again, Luna whined but rolled over to face him, as if just understanding she was hungry. She stretched and shook sand off her hide. Yawning she turned to him and pushed up against him with a rumble of enjoyment in her chest.

He decided to let her walk along side him, if she tired, he could easily put the 35 pound hatchling on his back as he searched for food along the beach. He searched for clams, digging of a pitiful small amount, just enough to tide them over as he continued to search. Luna grew board, finding rocks and kicking them along the sand before chasing them and pouncing on them as if they were prey and giggling the whole time. She only stopped when she came back up to Ezulie, whining softly.

“Hungry, aren't you” he smiled softly and grabbed the small amount of clams and washed the sand off of them before the used his claws to break them open “Its not much.. but its better then nothing”. Luna gave no complaint as she slurped down the slimy meal, seemingly rather pleased with its contents. Ezulie on the other hand, had found some seaweed and was currently munching on the odd textured plant, a curl of his lip at the saltines “were going to need to find some water..”
Second entry already
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Entry #2

Erzulie had decided to call her Luna, something about how her scales shined in the moonlight of their first night together under the stars. She had slept beside him, curled up against his side. It felt familiar.. like an echo of a memory of a forgotten past. He sighed softly and shook his head, it seemed an echo was all he was going to get.

He groomed himself as she slept, trying not to disturb the infant mirror as he tried to brought his claws through the dirty matted and salt encrusted fur. It would not be done properly till he found a supply of fresh water to wast the salt out of his fur and dry properly. But there was another problem, they needed food, and shelter. He could hear things during the night, calls and shrieks, deeper inland and got little sleep because of it.

Come first light he carefully nudged at the sleeping mirror. “Time to wake, Luna.. we need to get moving.” The mirror stirred, whining lightly and rolled over to face the other way, trying to ignore him and go back to sleep and the tundra sighed. “come on, on your feet, if you want breakfast, I need to go look for some, and I cant leave you out in the open”

Once again, Luna whined but rolled over to face him, as if just understanding she was hungry. She stretched and shook sand off her hide. Yawning she turned to him and pushed up against him with a rumble of enjoyment in her chest.

He decided to let her walk along side him, if she tired, he could easily put the 35 pound hatchling on his back as he searched for food along the beach. He searched for clams, digging of a pitiful small amount, just enough to tide them over as he continued to search. Luna grew board, finding rocks and kicking them along the sand before chasing them and pouncing on them as if they were prey and giggling the whole time. She only stopped when she came back up to Ezulie, whining softly.

“Hungry, aren't you” he smiled softly and grabbed the small amount of clams and washed the sand off of them before the used his claws to break them open “Its not much.. but its better then nothing”. Luna gave no complaint as she slurped down the slimy meal, seemingly rather pleased with its contents. Ezulie on the other hand, had found some seaweed and was currently munching on the odd textured plant, a curl of his lip at the saltines “were going to need to find some water..”
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Delicious, delicious salt.

Poor fluffyboy.
Delicious, delicious salt.

Poor fluffyboy.
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Entry #3

Scavenging for the little one was easy enough, but Ezulie made a face as his own tummy grumbled. Plants were scarce, and the seaweed from earlier had been awful. He kept away from the mushrooms that grew in the dark soil, something telling him he would regret tasting one. He had been lucky enough to stumble above a honey bee hive, able to harvest some sweet honey comb to give. His stomach was greedy but he did not wish to take the bees entire supply. He left half of the honey comb in place and once more continued to scrounge.
They had found no true shelter yet, Luna often sleeping on his back as he walked. The young mirror was getting heavy, a third of his size and soon she would have to walk on her own. Ezulie was certain that once they were able to find a decent patch of forest, he would dig them a nice burrow with two chambers to rest in.
It was mid day of the third day of wandering when he spotting a large grouping of trees off in the distance, and behind it a thick carpet of green for at least what seemed like a mile. “Well, Luna, it looks like were in luck”
“Luck...?”
He nodded towards the growing mirror who now walked beside him, close enough to feel her brush against his fur, which, thankfully for a small stream that had been emptying into a stream, now had a nice gleam and softness to it. “see those trees over there..?”
Luna looked forward, sniffing the air before nodding. Clucking her young as it trying to say 'tree' but gave up with a disgruntled snort.
“Trees mean soft ground, and safety, I can have us a burrow by tomorrow night if i have enough energy, and we wont have to walk all day, we can even-” something moved in the corner of his vision, and he stopped in mid trot to scan the surrounding area. His eyes narrowed as he took a good whiff of the air. Large boulders by the beach could easily produce cover for an enemy and Ezulie`s eyes narrowed as he lightly nudged Luna`s side “.. keep walking..” He took kept walking, aware of the tension form the confused mirror.
“Danger..?”
The tundra nodded “Maybe...” His flat teeth ground against each other anxiously and he kept looking back. Luna suddenly gave a shriek, stopping in her own trot, looking at something in front of her. Ezulie spun his head to look, fur puffing up in reaction to make himself look bigger.

Two centaur were coming at them, spears in hands and were running at full speed. There was no way to fly without leaving Luna, she was too large now to pick her up and fly with. “to the water! WATER!” he urged Luna to the water, keeping her behind him as the centaur closed the distance, chucking a spear that clipped one of the tundras wings. A second thrown spear missed and imbedded itself in the sand.

Luna shrieked again, noticing the damage to Ezulie`s wing, hesitating to go deeper into the water. He glanced back “Go! Deeper! They can't follow you there!” She gave a wimper of protest but moved deeper, diving under the gentle waves. Ezulie turned back to the centaurs that now had primitive swords. They looked thin, desperate for a kill even Ezulie's size. He reared and gave a good swipe to one on his left while the other sliced him deep across the shoulder as Ezulie came down from the first attack.
Fanning his wings knocked the second centaur down and he lunged, snapping at him with his tusks and ignored the yells from the centaur. The kill was easy after that, the first frail starving centaur had been killed by the first blow. Just as quickly as it has started, it was over and Ezulie stood panting over the two bodies. Luna came form the water, concern on her face as she came to nuzzle against him gently “Hurt” He took a breath and nodded
“Yes.. but ill survive”
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Entry #3

Scavenging for the little one was easy enough, but Ezulie made a face as his own tummy grumbled. Plants were scarce, and the seaweed from earlier had been awful. He kept away from the mushrooms that grew in the dark soil, something telling him he would regret tasting one. He had been lucky enough to stumble above a honey bee hive, able to harvest some sweet honey comb to give. His stomach was greedy but he did not wish to take the bees entire supply. He left half of the honey comb in place and once more continued to scrounge.
They had found no true shelter yet, Luna often sleeping on his back as he walked. The young mirror was getting heavy, a third of his size and soon she would have to walk on her own. Ezulie was certain that once they were able to find a decent patch of forest, he would dig them a nice burrow with two chambers to rest in.
It was mid day of the third day of wandering when he spotting a large grouping of trees off in the distance, and behind it a thick carpet of green for at least what seemed like a mile. “Well, Luna, it looks like were in luck”
“Luck...?”
He nodded towards the growing mirror who now walked beside him, close enough to feel her brush against his fur, which, thankfully for a small stream that had been emptying into a stream, now had a nice gleam and softness to it. “see those trees over there..?”
Luna looked forward, sniffing the air before nodding. Clucking her young as it trying to say 'tree' but gave up with a disgruntled snort.
“Trees mean soft ground, and safety, I can have us a burrow by tomorrow night if i have enough energy, and we wont have to walk all day, we can even-” something moved in the corner of his vision, and he stopped in mid trot to scan the surrounding area. His eyes narrowed as he took a good whiff of the air. Large boulders by the beach could easily produce cover for an enemy and Ezulie`s eyes narrowed as he lightly nudged Luna`s side “.. keep walking..” He took kept walking, aware of the tension form the confused mirror.
“Danger..?”
The tundra nodded “Maybe...” His flat teeth ground against each other anxiously and he kept looking back. Luna suddenly gave a shriek, stopping in her own trot, looking at something in front of her. Ezulie spun his head to look, fur puffing up in reaction to make himself look bigger.

Two centaur were coming at them, spears in hands and were running at full speed. There was no way to fly without leaving Luna, she was too large now to pick her up and fly with. “to the water! WATER!” he urged Luna to the water, keeping her behind him as the centaur closed the distance, chucking a spear that clipped one of the tundras wings. A second thrown spear missed and imbedded itself in the sand.

Luna shrieked again, noticing the damage to Ezulie`s wing, hesitating to go deeper into the water. He glanced back “Go! Deeper! They can't follow you there!” She gave a wimper of protest but moved deeper, diving under the gentle waves. Ezulie turned back to the centaurs that now had primitive swords. They looked thin, desperate for a kill even Ezulie's size. He reared and gave a good swipe to one on his left while the other sliced him deep across the shoulder as Ezulie came down from the first attack.
Fanning his wings knocked the second centaur down and he lunged, snapping at him with his tusks and ignored the yells from the centaur. The kill was easy after that, the first frail starving centaur had been killed by the first blow. Just as quickly as it has started, it was over and Ezulie stood panting over the two bodies. Luna came form the water, concern on her face as she came to nuzzle against him gently “Hurt” He took a breath and nodded
“Yes.. but ill survive”
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@Kaial,@Scyras
A new section will be written soon! Christmas holidays are a little hectic! though i will give a bit of a hint, there may be a little Christmas surprise for Erzulie, good things come in small packages!
@Kaial,@Scyras
A new section will be written soon! Christmas holidays are a little hectic! though i will give a bit of a hint, there may be a little Christmas surprise for Erzulie, good things come in small packages!
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