Creative Corner

I think I need some help with my lore. Refining it and just getting it put together enough to be pleasant to read. Need some more ideas as I only have the basis of what I want. I seem to be "ok" at making the broad spectrum story make up but I have troubles getting filler content. So I will post what I have so far and let me know what you think? I am new at this stuff so don't laugh at me too hard :] [center][b](Clan name for a Fae dominated Clan???)[/b][/center] [center][u][b]Clan Setting[/b][/u][/center] Is built into a massive, hallowed out butte in the Highland Scrubs. The butte is not shared. The sole fortress of Source's clan. The colour of the butte seems to be dark compared to the colour of the land around it. On the top of the butte is a massive array of wires and lightning poles that have a constant lightning storm sending a flurry of bolts from wire to wire, pole to pole. [center][u][b]~The Royalty(Fae Only)~[/b][/u][/center] ~[b]Source[/b]-Leader of the clan. Fae Mother. Queen. ~[b]Dyrus[/b]-First of the Fae to be brought in by the Fae mother. Mate of Source. King. ~[b]Soraka[/b]-Adopted Daughter of Fae Mother/King. Crown Princess. ~[b]Ezreal[/b]-Mate taken in by Soraka. Crown Prince. ~[b]Ahri[/b]-Daughter of Soraka/Ezreal. ~[b]Wraith[/b]-Brought in by the Fae Mother. Adopted sibling of Soraka and younger by her by 2 weeks. Prince. ~[b]Halley[/b]-Orphan brought in by Fae Mother. Made a Princess and paired with Wraith. Aspiring warrior. Becomes Queen later by forceful overthrow of Source. [center][u][b]~Fae Clan Members~[/b][/u][/center] ~[b]Carmine[/b]-brought into the clan as a hatchling. Lady of blood. Paired with Vladimir ~[b]Isodu[/b]- Fae enchantress brought in by the Fae Mother. Seer/Soothsayer of the clan. ~[b]Katarina[/b]-brought into the clan as a hatchling. Aspiring warrior. Best friend of Halley. ~[b]Vladimir[/b]- brought into the clan by the Fae mother as a mate for Carmine. ~[b]Garen[/b]- Traveling Fae who seeks refuge in the clan. Granted permenant residence when Katarina chose him as her bonded mate. [center][url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&id=345191&tab=dragon&did=36479354][img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/350/364794/36479354_350.png[/img][/url][/center] [center][b][u]Source[/u][/b][/center] Mysterious Mother of Fae. Queen of the Clan. She is strict to those amongst her Royalty. She is loving, caring, but puts a big emphasis on learning by mistakes and by lecture. She holds an air of superiority, and elegance along with a shroud of mystery. She is especially loving of Fae hatchlings. She rescues many rejected Fae from the wilds, hence obtaining the name Fae Mother. Her judgement is harsh but also motherly. She is easily upsettable yet understandable. Mysterious yet familiar. She rules the clan from an Obsidian throne taken from the Fire Lands. [center][b][u]Dyrus[/u][/b][/center] Reserved. Quiet. Strict and very alike to the way Source takes her approach to interacting with the clan. Not very talkative and less interactive than Source. Keeps to himself and lets Source run the clan. Not king in action or power but only in name due to his relationship with Source. [center][url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&id=345191&tab=dragon&did=36800989][img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/350/368010/36800989_350.png[/img][/url][/center] [center][b][u]Soraka[/u][/b][/center] The first and oldest daughter of Source by adoption. Crown Princess destined to take over the clan some day. She is fawned over by the rest of the clan as she is of lovely colouring that is pleasant to look at. She has a very calm desposition and takes to actions that increase her look of elegence and royalty. She is a bit bossy and thinks of herself as above the others for the most part as she lets her position get to her ego. Yet she still loves the rest of the clan and holds every one in her heart very dearly. [center][b][u]Ezreal[/u][/b][/center] The chosen mate of Soraka. A very polite Fae who knows his mate can sometimes come across as sassy and arrogant. He constantly makes right her mistakes when dealing with the rest of the clan. He is very calm and unknowingly fuels Soraka's royal arrogance by fawning over her very being and doing anything she asks. He is fairly simple for Fae Royalty. Is usually the face of royalty that deals the most with the rest of the clan. Is also in charge with the Clans treasury. [center][b][u]Ahri[/u][/b][/center] Daughter of Soraka and Ezreal. Still too young to derive anything about her nature. But she is definitely quite the playful hatchling. Source is constantly watching over and playing with her. [center][b][u]Wraith[/u][/b][/center] Adopted Sibling of Soraka. Prince who gave up the Crown Prince position to find glory on the fields of battle instead of leading the clan. He is a warrior and strategist. He is in charge of the Clan's defenses and fighters. He trains dragons for the clan's defense as well as teaching others how to hunt effectively. Also in charge of gathering items. He is very outgoing, inteligent, strong, and merry. He is loved by all in the clan for the most part. [center][url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&id=345191&tab=dragon&did=37218932][img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/350/372190/37218932_350.png[/img][/url][/center] [center][b][u]Halley[/u][/b][/center] Originaly from a different clan in the Lightning region. However a mysterious attack on her clan left her the sole survivor. She wandered around trying to find acceptance into other clans but was turned away (for being Fae?"The Gemstone Blight"?). She was starving with no hope left when the Fae Mother found her crying and cold on the edge of a mesa at night. She was given comfort and was brought into the clan and given the title of Princess. She senses a little bit of jelousy and contempt from Soraka during her first bit of time at the clan. As she grew she began obtaining interest in magic and fighting. She is the bond mate of Wraith, who was her best friend when they were hatchlings. Halley is arguably the better fighter between her and Wraith. She also secretly has taught herself a variety of magic. She is the lead fighter for when the warriors of the clan must go out to fight. She loves every moment of fighting and it has slowly began to effect her. She has had her mind twisted(by magic and false assumptions based on Source's/Soraka's demeaner) to where she starts heading down a dark road that leads her to hate her royal family and causes her to seek out more power. [center][u][i]Halley's Theme[/i][/u][/center] [center][url]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nLGdTvsdKKI[/url][/center] [center][i]or[/i][/center] [center][url]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Q9XN14PCJaw[/url][/center] [center][b][u]Carmine[/u][/b][/center] A quiet and reserved Fae. She is an alchemist and took it upon herself to be the clans represenetive to the trading post when the clan is in need of baldwins or other services. She is called The Lady of Blood because she is a dark red and she and her mate have hatchlings with the skin of blood(as well as the questionable act of using dragon blood in alchemy). She knows magic and other mysterious happenings. She visits the seer on a daily basis. [center][b][u]Isodu[/u][/b][/center] The clans Seer/Soothsayer. She knows magic and she has a connection to the land. She gives advice to the rest of the clan. Gives blessings upon hunting and warrior parties. And sometimes gives foretellings of events to happen. So far all her tellings have come true so she is held in high regards and status. [center][img]https://i.imgur.com/tXFNqvS.png[/img][/center] [center][b][u](Unknown Fae. Found a possible fit for this "dragon character". Going for black/red colour "disguised evil")[/u][/b][/center] Taught Halley to fight using magic. Influences Halley to turn on Source and gain control of the Clan's and its holdings. (Also influences Halley to imprison Wraith and the rest of the Royal family) [b]I am debating if I should push the lore to Halley's redemption to overthrow the "evil" Fae and right her wrongs, or if I should have another Fae come to the picture to "persuade" her to right her wrongs(or right her wrongs for her and forcing her to realize what she has done). I would like to write an actual bit on this(small story with conversation. Short story of sorts) and I may look to pushing out a small animation as well but that particular bit about the animation would be way later down the road. Anyway, let me know what you think!! Throw some ideas my way etc. As I said, I am new at the lore sharing part so be kind :][/b]