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TOPIC | Poetry!
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1_ceZiXjnplDuTnnct1gwIl2YF22uyqtJ99vGA69HjX4/edit?usp=sharing
So, we're doing a poetry slam at my school, and I wanted to know what y'all think about this/these piece(s)!
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1_ceZiXjnplDuTnnct1gwIl2YF22uyqtJ99vGA69HjX4/edit?usp=sharing
So, we're doing a poetry slam at my school, and I wanted to know what y'all think about this/these piece(s)!
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@EonArisen
This piece looks really interesting! It has kind of this lyrical-ness to it that almost makes me think of singing!
The the metaphors you used were really good, such as the cat and mouse one. That really helped paint a picture in my mind.
@EonArisen
This piece looks really interesting! It has kind of this lyrical-ness to it that almost makes me think of singing!
The the metaphors you used were really good, such as the cat and mouse one. That really helped paint a picture in my mind.
Why, thank you! I try my best.
Why, thank you! I try my best.
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