just wanna see some lore before i head to bed. i'm also writing some of my bio snippets for my dragons on my second page (first is already done!) so check those out if you want. :)
most recently finished, but still editing tbh:
[url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=33607853]
[img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/350/336079/33607853_350.png[/img]
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now working on:
[url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=34075459]
[img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/350/340755/34075459_350.png[/img]
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i feel like i'm going to run out of clan roles soon. ;_;
show me your lore! could be one that you just finished, your favorite, or one in progress!
just wanna see some lore before i head to bed. i'm also writing some of my bio snippets for my dragons on my second page (first is already done!) so check those out if you want. :)
most recently finished, but still editing tbh:
now working on:
i feel like i'm going to run out of clan roles soon. ;_;
show me your lore! could be one that you just finished, your favorite, or one in progress!
@rapunzels Oh gosh, I really enjoy how well written your lore is! Makes me want to write more-in depth pieces for my dragons, I have so many to finish still /sweats
Here are the few I'm quite happy with!
[url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=19230589]
[img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/350/192306/19230589_350.png[/img]
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//The vengeful clan leader
[url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=32851529]
[img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/350/328516/32851529_350.png[/img]
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//The winter emperor
[url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=32004937]
[img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/350/320050/32004937_350.png[/img]
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//The cursed merchant (bio layout still a WIP!)
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rapunzels Oh gosh, I really enjoy how well written your lore is! Makes me want to write more-in depth pieces for my dragons, I have so many to finish still /sweats
Here are the few I'm quite happy with!
//The vengeful clan leader
//The winter emperor
//The cursed merchant (bio layout still a WIP!)
[url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=16410890]
[img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/350/164109/16410890_350.png[/img]
[/url]This is my favorite bio so far. (And the only one with all the graphics |'D)
@rapunzels
Really enjoyed Tomás lore overall. Thought I would say that the font is a little small for my liking and that maybe to separate it in multiple paragraph would work better for his bio in particular.
But overall I really enjoyed your prose <3
I specially liked how you described his music and how much of his personality was shown in so little words.
Good luck with thinking in more jobs for your lair, tho. Maybe you could try some of the "weirder" ones, like bee keeping, or the hatchling flight instructor or the cleaner...
This is my favorite bio so far. (And the only one with all the graphics |'D)
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rapunzels
Really enjoyed Tomás lore overall. Thought I would say that the font is a little small for my liking and that maybe to separate it in multiple paragraph would work better for his bio in particular.
But overall I really enjoyed your prose <3
I specially liked how you described his music and how much of his personality was shown in so little words.
Good luck with thinking in more jobs for your lair, tho. Maybe you could try some of the "weirder" ones, like bee keeping, or the hatchling flight instructor or the cleaner...
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
Did someone say...
Loooore?
I honestly have hardly any lore written smh. But I do have a few!! It counts for something!! Anyways, here’s one of my dragons with lore:
[url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=20827603]
[img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/350/208277/20827603_350.png[/img]
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It’s a... bit long, so you definitely don’t have to read it
Did someone say...
Loooore?
I honestly have hardly any lore written smh. But I do have a few!! It counts for something!! Anyways, here’s one of my dragons with lore:
It’s a... bit long, so you definitely don’t have to read it
@rapunzels
Wow, Tomás' lore is so beautifully written~ I love how much of his whimsical personality you captured and your use of imagery is really wonderful as well.
I finished Beast's lore today, although it's a bit dark.
[url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=13668744]
[img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/350/136688/13668744_350.png[/img]
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I also have a post of my full clan lore, which is long and has way too many things going on. But that's [url=http://www1.flightrising.com/forums/cc/2084754]here[/url]!
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rapunzels
Wow, Tomás' lore is so beautifully written~ I love how much of his whimsical personality you captured and your use of imagery is really wonderful as well.
I finished Beast's lore today, although it's a bit dark.
I also have a post of my full clan lore, which is long and has way too many things going on. But that's
here!
only null has a bio at the moment, and hers was written by the amazing @shogo! (sorry for miswanted pings)
her bio layout is a wip
[url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=39560155]
[img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/350/395602/39560155_350.png[/img]
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only null has a bio at the moment, and hers was written by the amazing @
shogo! (sorry for miswanted pings)
her bio layout is a wip
[url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=25471104]
[img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/350/254712/25471104_350.png[/img]
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Aamon has like the most finished lore in my lair?
[url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=25011773]
[img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/350/250118/25011773_350.png[/img]
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On the other hand Acolyte, while not finished, has some of my favorite lore.
Aamon has like the most finished lore in my lair?
On the other hand Acolyte, while not finished, has some of my favorite lore.
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sleepytroll oh, my lore is no where near in depth yet unfortunately! i'm just solidifying everyone's personality before i can write some more narrative pieces... which will be... a very long time from now.
anyway i really, really enjoyed your lore!! it's super well written, and i like the way sinclair and nova's tied together and how they foil each other- brute strength (and perseverance) vs cunning ambition. and bonus points for styling all three-- your dragons' outfits are so fitting for the lore, and just beautiful in general.
i decided to poke through some of your other dragons as well, and i really enjoyed them! i noticed that you focused more on backstory which i think is wonderful and something my clan lacks... severely. thanks for the inspo!
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Luca20 i loved it, particularly how you were able to capture a more sinister side of arcane and an arcane dragon. the shortness of the reader's sentences and thoughts add to the feeling of the story -- mundane observations that seem normal or dry even but take a different tone once you've read the ending. :) and finally, someone who likes to use second POV like me (in my progen Petal's bio, for example)
i also read solange's lore (posted on an earlier thread?); that was one of the best lore stories i've seen recently. the use of second person as the dragon's perspective was particularly neat! dare i say solange and sleepytroll's nova would get along... or at least have a great fight?
i'm working on reformatting all of my bios soon, and i'll keep that in mind! not sure if i want his bio in separate paragraphs, but you did make me realize that it doesn't quite flow so seamlessly as i thought so i'll work on making it more... flow-y? not sure which word i'm looking for.
anyhow, thanks for the advice and kind words~ and flight instructor is a good idea!
reading others soon, thanks for sharing guys :)
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sleepytroll oh, my lore is no where near in depth yet unfortunately! i'm just solidifying everyone's personality before i can write some more narrative pieces... which will be... a very long time from now.
anyway i really, really enjoyed your lore!! it's super well written, and i like the way sinclair and nova's tied together and how they foil each other- brute strength (and perseverance) vs cunning ambition. and bonus points for styling all three-- your dragons' outfits are so fitting for the lore, and just beautiful in general.
i decided to poke through some of your other dragons as well, and i really enjoyed them! i noticed that you focused more on backstory which i think is wonderful and something my clan lacks... severely. thanks for the inspo!
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Luca20 i loved it, particularly how you were able to capture a more sinister side of arcane and an arcane dragon. the shortness of the reader's sentences and thoughts add to the feeling of the story -- mundane observations that seem normal or dry even but take a different tone once you've read the ending. :) and finally, someone who likes to use second POV like me (in my progen Petal's bio, for example)
i also read solange's lore (posted on an earlier thread?); that was one of the best lore stories i've seen recently. the use of second person as the dragon's perspective was particularly neat! dare i say solange and sleepytroll's nova would get along... or at least have a great fight?
i'm working on reformatting all of my bios soon, and i'll keep that in mind! not sure if i want his bio in separate paragraphs, but you did make me realize that it doesn't quite flow so seamlessly as i thought so i'll work on making it more... flow-y? not sure which word i'm looking for.
anyhow, thanks for the advice and kind words~ and flight instructor is a good idea!
reading others soon, thanks for sharing guys :)
@
rapunzels
A majority of the back of my clan has lore if you want to look at that. There are too many to link here.
@
rapunzels
A majority of the back of my clan has lore if you want to look at that. There are too many to link here.
@rapunzels
Tomas sounds like a lovely soul! I liked the flow of his bio, felt pretty musical. :D
[url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=9556086]
[img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/350/95561/9556086_350.png[/img]
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Kurnaz has one of my favourite bios! Maybe I'm biased because I'm on a Team ICO kick.
[url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=18878068]
[img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/350/188781/18878068_350.png[/img]
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Zola is just a character I love. She's my most Plaguey dragon, but with a twist.
[url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=5205720]
[img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/350/52058/5205720_350.png[/img]
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Finally, I'm never sure how funny Segata's bio is if you're not familiar with the guy he's a fandragon of, but I always at least smile a little when I read it.
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rapunzels
Tomas sounds like a lovely soul! I liked the flow of his bio, felt pretty musical. :D
Kurnaz has one of my favourite bios! Maybe I'm biased because I'm on a Team ICO kick.
Zola is just a character I love. She's my most Plaguey dragon, but with a twist.
Finally, I'm never sure how funny Segata's bio is if you're not familiar with the guy he's a fandragon of, but I always at least smile a little when I read it.
