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If you want your dragons complimented, you've come to the right place! I'm offering lair reviews where I will pick your prettiest dragons and gush about them. I have a few different formats available with different price points; please read below!

A few general policies:
  1. Please be polite and patient.
  2. Send payment after the review is complete, please.
  3. I take gems and treasure at 1:1000. Mixed payment is fine.
  4. No need to ping me; I'm subscribed.
  5. By default I will not look at any tabs named "Sale," "Exalt," "Fodder," etc. Please indicate to me any other tabs that I shouldn't look at.
  6. If you want me to look in your Hibernal Den, please be sure to say as much in your form! (Nothing against the Den; I just forget it's there.)
  7. Price quotes are not final until the review is completed -- if you add or remove dragons from your lair while on the waiting list, your final price may differ from your initial quote.

Review types

Top 5 -- 15,000 treasure or 15 gems

I will pick the five dragons in your lair who interest me the most based on their thumbnails, then talk about why I like them.

Per Page -- 3,000 treasure or 3 gems per page reviewed


For each page of each tab in your lair, I will pick my favorite dragon based on thumbnails and talk about why I like them.

Remember, you can tell me not to review certain tabs -- you won't be charged for them.

Comprehensive Review -- 2,000 treasure or 2 gems per dragon in lair

Comprehensive reviews are currently unavailable.

I will go through your entire lair one by one and talk about all the dragons that catch my eye.

You will not be charged for dragons in tabs excluded from the review, and tabs named "Sales," "Exalt," "Fodder," etc. will automatically be excluded. So, if you have 86 dragons, but 14 of them are in a sales tab, you'll only be charged for 72 dragons.

If I end up commenting on fewer than 20% of the dragons in your lair, your final price will be discounted.

Proofreading -- 3,000 treasure or 3 gems per 100 words

I will proofread your dragons' bios, your clan profile, your lore -- pretty much anything FR-related. It can be offsite, too. Just not your homework, OK?

For proofreadings, I will copy and paste your work into a Google Doc and work on it there. I will make small edits directly to the document, but most of my concerns and suggestions will appear in comments. When I am finished, I will PM you the link to the document. If you are uncomfortable with me placing your work in a Google Doc, please do not request a proofreading.

Other options

Focus*: Would you like me to place particular focus on your dragon's bios or their apparel, or should I look at both?

Tone*: Are you looking for constructive criticism, or would you rather have a feel-good review full of compliments? (My reviews will be primarily positive regardless.)

PM or post? You can receive your review privately, via PM, or as a post on this thread. By default I will post it if you do not specify.


* Does not apply to proofreading.
If you want your dragons complimented, you've come to the right place! I'm offering lair reviews where I will pick your prettiest dragons and gush about them. I have a few different formats available with different price points; please read below!

A few general policies:
  1. Please be polite and patient.
  2. Send payment after the review is complete, please.
  3. I take gems and treasure at 1:1000. Mixed payment is fine.
  4. No need to ping me; I'm subscribed.
  5. By default I will not look at any tabs named "Sale," "Exalt," "Fodder," etc. Please indicate to me any other tabs that I shouldn't look at.
  6. If you want me to look in your Hibernal Den, please be sure to say as much in your form! (Nothing against the Den; I just forget it's there.)
  7. Price quotes are not final until the review is completed -- if you add or remove dragons from your lair while on the waiting list, your final price may differ from your initial quote.

Review types

Top 5 -- 15,000 treasure or 15 gems

I will pick the five dragons in your lair who interest me the most based on their thumbnails, then talk about why I like them.

Per Page -- 3,000 treasure or 3 gems per page reviewed


For each page of each tab in your lair, I will pick my favorite dragon based on thumbnails and talk about why I like them.

Remember, you can tell me not to review certain tabs -- you won't be charged for them.

Comprehensive Review -- 2,000 treasure or 2 gems per dragon in lair

Comprehensive reviews are currently unavailable.

I will go through your entire lair one by one and talk about all the dragons that catch my eye.

You will not be charged for dragons in tabs excluded from the review, and tabs named "Sales," "Exalt," "Fodder," etc. will automatically be excluded. So, if you have 86 dragons, but 14 of them are in a sales tab, you'll only be charged for 72 dragons.

If I end up commenting on fewer than 20% of the dragons in your lair, your final price will be discounted.

Proofreading -- 3,000 treasure or 3 gems per 100 words

I will proofread your dragons' bios, your clan profile, your lore -- pretty much anything FR-related. It can be offsite, too. Just not your homework, OK?

For proofreadings, I will copy and paste your work into a Google Doc and work on it there. I will make small edits directly to the document, but most of my concerns and suggestions will appear in comments. When I am finished, I will PM you the link to the document. If you are uncomfortable with me placing your work in a Google Doc, please do not request a proofreading.

Other options

Focus*: Would you like me to place particular focus on your dragon's bios or their apparel, or should I look at both?

Tone*: Are you looking for constructive criticism, or would you rather have a feel-good review full of compliments? (My reviews will be primarily positive regardless.)

PM or post? You can receive your review privately, via PM, or as a post on this thread. By default I will post it if you do not specify.


* Does not apply to proofreading.
If you'd like a review, please post in this thread or PM me.

For your convenience, feel free to use this form. (Or not, but please include all this information.)

Quote:

Review type:
Excluded tabs:
Should I look in the Hibernal Den?
Focus (bios, appearance, both):
Tone (positive or concrit):
PM or post?

Or if you're buying proofreading, you can just use this form.

Quote:

Proofreading please!

Links to document(s) to proofread:


Total word count:
If you'd like a review, please post in this thread or PM me.

For your convenience, feel free to use this form. (Or not, but please include all this information.)

Quote:

Review type:
Excluded tabs:
Should I look in the Hibernal Den?
Focus (bios, appearance, both):
Tone (positive or concrit):
PM or post?

Or if you're buying proofreading, you can just use this form.

Quote:

Proofreading please!

Links to document(s) to proofread:


Total word count:
Slots version 2.0

Reviews are generally but not always completed in the order the forms were received. (If I only have time for a short review, Top 5's may receive priority.)

NOTE: I currently am not taking requests for comprehensive reviews.
  1. DiamondBirth, top 5, 15kt/g
  2. OzmatheGreat, top 5, 15kt/g
  3. Kindryte, per page, 12kt/g
  4. ThatOneJay, top 5, 15kt/g

Ping list: empty
Slots version 2.0

Reviews are generally but not always completed in the order the forms were received. (If I only have time for a short review, Top 5's may receive priority.)

NOTE: I currently am not taking requests for comprehensive reviews.
  1. DiamondBirth, top 5, 15kt/g
  2. OzmatheGreat, top 5, 15kt/g
  3. Kindryte, per page, 12kt/g
  4. ThatOneJay, top 5, 15kt/g

Ping list: empty
Reserved against future need
Reserved against future need
And that should be everything! Feel free to sign up or let me know if you have any questions.
And that should be everything! Feel free to sign up or let me know if you have any questions.
@Lukra

Review type: Per page

Excluded tabs: Page 3 of the Square Toe tab, Misc, and the Exupery and Misc tabs in my den.

Should I look in the Hibernal Den? Yes please, but only the first tab, not Exupery or Misc.

Focus (bios, appearance, both): Both, but please keep in mind some of the bios are pretty out of date; I'm in the process of updating them all.

Tone (positive or concrit): Positive please, I might come back for a concrit review once all the bios are updated, but for now I'd like to know what I'm doing right!

PM or post? Post please!

Thank you!
@Lukra

Review type: Per page

Excluded tabs: Page 3 of the Square Toe tab, Misc, and the Exupery and Misc tabs in my den.

Should I look in the Hibernal Den? Yes please, but only the first tab, not Exupery or Misc.

Focus (bios, appearance, both): Both, but please keep in mind some of the bios are pretty out of date; I'm in the process of updating them all.

Tone (positive or concrit): Positive please, I might come back for a concrit review once all the bios are updated, but for now I'd like to know what I'm doing right!

PM or post? Post please!

Thank you!
Someday, the whole sky is going to light up, and it's gonna say, "TILT."
And that's gonna be the end of the world.

Artshop * Adopts * Skins
@TomSwifty All right! As I count that's five pages, so your price will be 5,000 treasure or 5 gems. Please let me know if I've miscounted. I'll add you to the list and let you know as soon as I've completed your review.
@TomSwifty All right! As I count that's five pages, so your price will be 5,000 treasure or 5 gems. Please let me know if I've miscounted. I'll add you to the list and let you know as soon as I've completed your review.
@Lukra Gotcha, looking forward to it!
@Lukra Gotcha, looking forward to it!
Someday, the whole sky is going to light up, and it's gonna say, "TILT."
And that's gonna be the end of the world.

Artshop * Adopts * Skins
@lukra hello!
Review type: top 5
Excluded tabs: projects, other
Should I look in the Hibernal Den? no need to!
Focus (bios, appearance, both): appearance, mostly- i don't have much in my bios except for personality bits, but you could look over those if you like x)
Tone (positive or concrit): positive please!
PM or post? post is fine!

thank you, and take all the time you need :>
@lukra hello!
Review type: top 5
Excluded tabs: projects, other
Should I look in the Hibernal Den? no need to!
Focus (bios, appearance, both): appearance, mostly- i don't have much in my bios except for personality bits, but you could look over those if you like x)
Tone (positive or concrit): positive please!
PM or post? post is fine!

thank you, and take all the time you need :>
x x my name is afri!
they/she FRT+0 ENG/JP
» about me » toyhouse
» commission directory
x x x art by Dovalore #82790. image links to character's toyhouse profile!
@Hocotate Got you! I'll add you to the list!
@Hocotate Got you! I'll add you to the list!
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