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Hello! My name is Acantha and I'm offering critiques for a small fee, as outlined below. I'm happy to read through clan lore, hatchery threads, sale threads, offsite stuff, pretty much whatever you like.
My critiques are, as stated in the title, very detailed and can be rather nitpicky. I look at how a piece of work looks overall, the effectiveness of your words/layout/images, as well as little things like grammar and syntax. I do tend to focus on what can be improved so you can assume that I like the features that I didn't comment on. =)
Pricing
There are three types of reviews: Full Review, Lair Review, and Follow-up. They are detailed below.
Full Review wrote:
Full Review: 10k treasure or 40 gems, +10k for each additional 1000 words over the base 1000 words
This is my personal forte; I examine your grammar, organization, layout--anything that sticks out to me that could possibly be improved, I will likely comment on.
This is my personal forte; I examine your grammar, organization, layout--anything that sticks out to me that could possibly be improved, I will likely comment on.
Lair Review wrote:
Lair Review: 5k treasure or 12 gems per lair page
(Please note that I only charge for the dragons I actually review; for example, if you have 100 dragons but you only want me to look at page one of your lair, then I would only charge you for that page.)
This is a more specialized review focusing on lair organization in particular; I typically sort by color but if you have any other considerations that you would like me to take into account, such as keeping a certain dragon at the front of your lair, please let me know.
(Please note that I only charge for the dragons I actually review; for example, if you have 100 dragons but you only want me to look at page one of your lair, then I would only charge you for that page.)
This is a more specialized review focusing on lair organization in particular; I typically sort by color but if you have any other considerations that you would like me to take into account, such as keeping a certain dragon at the front of your lair, please let me know.
Follow-up wrote:
Follow-up: Free with each review
Each review comes with a follow-up response after you've made some changes and would like to be my opinion on how these changes were executed, or if there are any further suggested changes.
Each review comes with a follow-up response after you've made some changes and would like to be my opinion on how these changes were executed, or if there are any further suggested changes.
In the rare case that I think that your content is so excellent that I cannot offer much feedback, I will reduce the price accordingly (it does happen from time to time!).
How to Sign Up
If interested in receiving a review for one of your pages, please fill out and post the below form on this thread! I will begin your critique once I receive payment; this is simply so it's easier for me to keep track of who paid and who hasn't!
Form wrote:
@Acantha
Page to be critiqued: (link)
Review Type:
Notes: (Level of completion, anything you want me to look at in particular, whether you want me to be especially harsh, etc)
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Page to be critiqued: (link)
Review Type:
Notes: (Level of completion, anything you want me to look at in particular, whether you want me to be especially harsh, etc)
Have you sent payment?: