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TOPIC | How Do I Bear?
Work in progress sketch for @Triibu ! Feedback and critiques are fine, but please keep in mind that this isn't a finished picture. Also, you can totally tell which parts I rushed, hahaha. |D Let me know if you want updates! [img]https://i.imgur.com/7JrWjhz.jpg[/img]
Work in progress sketch for @Triibu ! Feedback and critiques are fine, but please keep in mind that this isn't a finished picture. Also, you can totally tell which parts I rushed, hahaha. |D

Let me know if you want updates!
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@aboveclouds
Please ping me for updates! This is so good, even though it's not finished! Is the bear traditional or do you have some kind of godtier pencil brush?
@aboveclouds
Please ping me for updates! This is so good, even though it's not finished! Is the bear traditional or do you have some kind of godtier pencil brush?
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@Skua

Thank you! The picture is 100% digital - I just added a texture to the BG and used a textured brush so it felt more like drawing on paper. The brushes are the Pencil Pal and Primary Pencil from Autodesk Sketchbook.
@Skua

Thank you! The picture is 100% digital - I just added a texture to the BG and used a textured brush so it felt more like drawing on paper. The brushes are the Pencil Pal and Primary Pencil from Autodesk Sketchbook.
@aboveclouds
Interesting. I have a sketchbook account but never bothered to download the program. I might have to try it sometime!
@aboveclouds
Interesting. I have a sketchbook account but never bothered to download the program. I might have to try it sometime!
On hiatus
@AboveClouds Even for a sketch, that is amazing! The perspective especially is very impressive, as well as the face, which I see a lot of people mess up easily with bears. The only thing that looks a little off is the ears, they’re a bit big for a grizzly, which I’m assuming this is :) I’d love to see future updates!
@AboveClouds Even for a sketch, that is amazing! The perspective especially is very impressive, as well as the face, which I see a lot of people mess up easily with bears. The only thing that looks a little off is the ears, they’re a bit big for a grizzly, which I’m assuming this is :) I’d love to see future updates!
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@AboveClouds
Oh my, I love the details on this character, and composition is great! Anatomy is pretty much spot-on.

A little critique I have is that the snout looks off somehow - too long? angle/perspective off? too dog-like? I'm not sure what the precise thing is.
Also have to agree with SilverPhoenix, maybe ears can also be fluffier (unless you were going for more deer-like ears to match the horns)
@AboveClouds
Oh my, I love the details on this character, and composition is great! Anatomy is pretty much spot-on.

A little critique I have is that the snout looks off somehow - too long? angle/perspective off? too dog-like? I'm not sure what the precise thing is.
Also have to agree with SilverPhoenix, maybe ears can also be fluffier (unless you were going for more deer-like ears to match the horns)
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@aboveclouds

holy heck i l o v e it
@aboveclouds

holy heck i l o v e it