[center]I drew this a long time ago in my sketchbook, but I still really like the pose and I thought about turning it into an adopt
So I went over the lineart and I love how it turned out! Would anyone be interested in this as an adopt and if so, how much would you pay for it? Any help is greatly appreciated!
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[i]Edit: Did a quick adopts for one of my own dragons. Right now I'm thinking the secondary and primary genes are gonna be hand-drawn (maybe with an extra fee for complex genes like crystal/lionfish/wasp/etc?), and terts are gonna be sponsored for the first time drawing them, but free for every other time[/i]
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I drew this a long time ago in my sketchbook, but I still really like the pose and I thought about turning it into an adopt
So I went over the lineart and I love how it turned out! Would anyone be interested in this as an adopt and if so, how much would you pay for it? Any help is greatly appreciated!
Edit: Did a quick adopts for one of my own dragons. Right now I'm thinking the secondary and primary genes are gonna be hand-drawn (maybe with an extra fee for complex genes like crystal/lionfish/wasp/etc?), and terts are gonna be sponsored for the first time drawing them, but free for every other time
Mostly just stopping by to say I absolutely LOVE that pose, it's so dynamic and fun!
For pricing, maybe 500g/kt? Maybe more, it's pretty unique, but it seems like most adopts on here go for around 300-500g.
Mostly just stopping by to say I absolutely LOVE that pose, it's so dynamic and fun!
For pricing, maybe 500g/kt? Maybe more, it's pretty unique, but it seems like most adopts on here go for around 300-500g.
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Definitely, I agree with the 300-500 range.
Definitely, I agree with the 300-500 range.
The art quality is definitely 500k tier, but this pose & some design elements are driving me crazy. Instead of raptor claws, they have paws and the wings also seem really low on the body; coming out of the ribs instead of behind the shoulders. I know too far up they'll obscure the head but this far down makes it look a bit broken. I definitely want to see you open a shop though.
The art quality is definitely 500k tier, but this pose & some design elements are driving me crazy. Instead of raptor claws, they have paws and the wings also seem really low on the body; coming out of the ribs instead of behind the shoulders. I know too far up they'll obscure the head but this far down makes it look a bit broken. I definitely want to see you open a shop though.
[center]@DemonicDuchess
Thank you for your feedback! I did give them the large raptor claws, but you're right in that the paw-pads are a bit different. I thought it added to the whimsical, cute, and playful feeling of the pose but I can understand if it's a bit too jarring/off-model
As for the wings, that was much more of a deliberate choice. Normally drawing dragon wings, I do end up putting them far back. Because the regular shoulder joint and the shoulder of the wing both need to account for a wide range of movement and associate with a large attachment of muscles, they need to have a fair amount of distance between them in order to accommodate. That being said, after taking a closer look I can see where the disconnect is, and I think if I moved the hump of the chest lower down, it might make it seem less like they're attached to the ribs and more of them having a very larg abdominal cavity for all their bones and muscles and organs and whatnot, which would be more accurate.
[i]Edit: Okay, I reworked the chest a little bit, what do you think? I also added a side-by-side comparison to really illustrate the difference (the one on the left is the old version, the right one is the new one[/i]
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DemonicDuchess
Thank you for your feedback! I did give them the large raptor claws, but you're right in that the paw-pads are a bit different. I thought it added to the whimsical, cute, and playful feeling of the pose but I can understand if it's a bit too jarring/off-model
As for the wings, that was much more of a deliberate choice. Normally drawing dragon wings, I do end up putting them far back. Because the regular shoulder joint and the shoulder of the wing both need to account for a wide range of movement and associate with a large attachment of muscles, they need to have a fair amount of distance between them in order to accommodate. That being said, after taking a closer look I can see where the disconnect is, and I think if I moved the hump of the chest lower down, it might make it seem less like they're attached to the ribs and more of them having a very larg abdominal cavity for all their bones and muscles and organs and whatnot, which would be more accurate.
Edit: Okay, I reworked the chest a little bit, what do you think? I also added a side-by-side comparison to really illustrate the difference (the one on the left is the old version, the right one is the new one
Sorry, I should've specified that I was talking about their pawed hands rather than their feet. They grind against my dinosaur knowledge so they squick me a bit, but it's minor in comparison to the wing issue. Of which, I do respect your reasoning. It does make sense on that level. However, I disagree because there wouldn't be the proper musculature in the middle/bottom of the ribs to support wings in that manner, not without another set of shoulder joints.
However, I do very much enjoy the edit to the chest. The chest was anatomically correct before, (which is why I didn't mention it,) but it definitely didn't read that way. With it smoothed out a bit, it definitely looks more like they're enjoying themselves, rather than writhing in agony so that's good. Overall it does look immensely better. I think you could sell this version without issue. Thank you so much for hearing me out on this, btw. I hope I haven't been too blunt.
Sorry, I should've specified that I was talking about their pawed hands rather than their feet. They grind against my dinosaur knowledge so they squick me a bit, but it's minor in comparison to the wing issue. Of which, I do respect your reasoning. It does make sense on that level. However, I disagree because there wouldn't be the proper musculature in the middle/bottom of the ribs to support wings in that manner, not without another set of shoulder joints.
However, I do very much enjoy the edit to the chest. The chest was anatomically correct before, (which is why I didn't mention it,) but it definitely didn't read that way. With it smoothed out a bit, it definitely looks more like they're enjoying themselves, rather than writhing in agony so that's good. Overall it does look immensely better. I think you could sell this version without issue. Thank you so much for hearing me out on this, btw. I hope I haven't been too blunt.
Orrr maybe you could add optional hands? 0w0 I know the idea is to have just one base you can easily recolor and make good coin on, but sometimes options can go a long way and this way, you can satisfy both camps (fluffy vs scaly.)
As for discussing it further, sure thing. My PM's are open and we can even move to discord, if you like. ^^
Orrr maybe you could add optional hands? 0w0 I know the idea is to have just one base you can easily recolor and make good coin on, but sometimes options can go a long way and this way, you can satisfy both camps (fluffy vs scaly.)
As for discussing it further, sure thing. My PM's are open and we can even move to discord, if you like. ^^
