[s]I might just pay for someone to help me write Lore at this point X)[/s]
Lol NO not yet. Just need some inspiration... as well as a place to share the base/skeleton of a Lore idea for these two I just wrote.
So we've got Yuumei, an Angel with a frail body but tender heart, and (currently) Unnamed, a creature of... less [i]graceful [/i]origins and rather violent-natured. They were both the "rejects" of their families throughout their childhoods and onward; Yuumei because everyone thought she was cursed, and Unnamed because of his violent nature (being raised mostly mother-less after his mother passed away when he was 5 greatly affected his attitude, as he was closer to her than he was to his father). Where Yuumei would simply go cry in her family's large flower gardens, he would take out his anger physically.. on [i]people[/i] as well as things.
That's all for now.
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Other than the fact that they have a son:
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I might just pay for someone to help me write Lore at this point X)
Lol NO not yet. Just need some inspiration... as well as a place to share the base/skeleton of a Lore idea for these two I just wrote.
So we've got Yuumei, an Angel with a frail body but tender heart, and (currently) Unnamed, a creature of... less
graceful origins and rather violent-natured. They were both the "rejects" of their families throughout their childhoods and onward; Yuumei because everyone thought she was cursed, and Unnamed because of his violent nature (being raised mostly mother-less after his mother passed away when he was 5 greatly affected his attitude, as he was closer to her than he was to his father). Where Yuumei would simply go cry in her family's large flower gardens, he would take out his anger physically.. on
people as well as things.
That's all for now.
Other than the fact that they have a son:
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All of my dragons who have lore have pretty short lore. A few of my favorites are:
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Des, the clan healer
[url=https://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=5544357]
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Aine, the Nesting Grounds guardian
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Zohar, the 'magician'
[url=https://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=57334708]
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Pilane, the prison
[url=https://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=57646151]
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and Lanie, the swamp princess
All of my dragons who have lore have pretty short lore. A few of my favorites are:
Des, the clan healer
Aine, the Nesting Grounds guardian
Zohar, the 'magician'
Pilane, the prison
and Lanie, the swamp princess
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I'm digging what you have at this point, it's interesting how their personalities kinda crash but also how they struggle w/very similar situations of abandonment and rejection, like, how one's upbringing is meaninful in the long run and that can be what helps them improve or become worse (duno... kinda like that). The fact that they have bonded and have offspring(?/adopted can also bring out some curious story over all, would love to see how it all develops so wish you luck on your work c:!
dunno what counts as "short lore", but I write like, very few, I try to be concise on my stuff (which I guess I'm doing fine-ish mostly bcuz english isn't my native language lol), and I've seen huge lore bios, like, really big, it's kinda intimidating but also inspiring I guess haha
from shortest to "not-short-what-the-hell?!" my lore is a complete mess only understandable to me but I still cherish it
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I'm digging what you have at this point, it's interesting how their personalities kinda crash but also how they struggle w/very similar situations of abandonment and rejection, like, how one's upbringing is meaninful in the long run and that can be what helps them improve or become worse (duno... kinda like that). The fact that they have bonded and have offspring(?/adopted can also bring out some curious story over all, would love to see how it all develops so wish you luck on your work c:!
dunno what counts as "short lore", but I write like, very few, I try to be concise on my stuff (which I guess I'm doing fine-ish mostly bcuz english isn't my native language lol), and I've seen huge lore bios, like, really big, it's kinda intimidating but also inspiring I guess haha
from shortest to "not-short-what-the-hell?!" my lore is a complete mess only understandable to me but I still cherish it
Most of my dragons only have a paragraph or so of lore. I don't often have the time and energy to write full stories so I just try to get their personality, role/job and motivations down, and sometimes a little bit of backstory.
Here's some of them:
[url=https://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=38385114]
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[url=https://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=42571818]
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[url=https://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=49278700]
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[url=https://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=57779726]
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[url=https://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=52146977]
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Hmm~ does having "short quotes" only count? Pfft if so, I got many. Most of them are in first tab though XD (Frion(s) tab) but there's some more scattered through out my main lair.
The main reason is that I already busy writing my own graphic light novel, so yeah XD I just doing Flight Rising one when I'm bored.
But good luck on your lore of course :D
Hmm~ does having "short quotes" only count? Pfft if so, I got many. Most of them are in first tab though XD (Frion(s) tab) but there's some more scattered through out my main lair.
The main reason is that I already busy writing my own graphic light novel, so yeah XD I just doing Flight Rising one when I'm bored.
But good luck on your lore of course :D
I'd show you my dragons if 1. The lore wasn't across two bios and 2. The dragons weren't on the verge of having a lore change
Plus I only have one Dragon with "official" lore, the rest have notes that are going to be made into full lores eventually
Good luck with your dragons though! [emoji=coatl winking size=1]
I'd show you my dragons if 1. The lore wasn't across two bios and 2. The dragons weren't on the verge of having a lore change
Plus I only have one Dragon with "official" lore, the rest have notes that are going to be made into full lores eventually
Good luck with your dragons though!
For me, lore works better if I start with a scene that lets me play with an idea I had about the dragon. Some of the dragons below, like Lobsneaks, are already pretty developed in a longer story I'm working on offline. Others, like Terra and Aurelia, didn't have anything at all when I started, and things just developed in the course of writing.
Lobsneaks
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Terra
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Ajani
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Aurelia
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For me, lore works better if I start with a scene that lets me play with an idea I had about the dragon. Some of the dragons below, like Lobsneaks, are already pretty developed in a longer story I'm working on offline. Others, like Terra and Aurelia, didn't have anything at all when I started, and things just developed in the course of writing.
Lobsneaks
Terra
Ajani
Aurelia
[indent][font=calibri][color=#4D3F2C]The only boy so far that has lore in his bio. It will be a lot longer once I make a lore thread, but for now it's just a short backstory. :')
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The only boy so far that has lore in his bio. It will be a lot longer once I make a lore thread, but for now it's just a short backstory. :')
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[columns]@kyrin18 Most of my lore is at least a few paragraphs (if not longer), but I do have a couple with shorter lore! You can get away with just talking about the dragon's origins and what they currently are up to, it's a simple and concise way to write lore if you don't want it to be very long.
For example, my bab Chancellor here has just a few sentences for his lore (with some added bits in his bio as well), but I think it comes across fairly well.
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@kyrin18 Most of my lore is at least a few paragraphs (if not longer), but I do have a couple with shorter lore! You can get away with just talking about the dragon's origins and what they currently are up to, it's a simple and concise way to write lore if you don't want it to be very long.
For example, my bab Chancellor here has just a few sentences for his lore (with some added bits in his bio as well), but I think it comes across fairly well.
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I like your starting lore. What I think about when writing short and sweet lore is more writing about how others might view them based on first impressions/rumors. Think of what someone could convey in a five minute conversation. But yeah, that's how I kinda went with her but the lore is a bit rough.
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I like your starting lore. What I think about when writing short and sweet lore is more writing about how others might view them based on first impressions/rumors. Think of what someone could convey in a five minute conversation. But yeah, that's how I kinda went with her but the lore is a bit rough.