LucyLocket's Clan

(Been pretty busy, trying to stay a little more active)

A rather large clan moved from the
Mirrorlight Promenade to the Gladeveins after a lost battle... The hidden home now stationed in the Shrieking Wilds are now full of fae and mirrors and more. The walls are hidden by leaves and thick underbrush but lanterns are used to light the territory of the home base and some territory markers. It is not a good idea to tress-pass, despite their hospitality the clan of Sonder are quick to chase a trespasser out with fang and claw or magic. They've already ben chased out once they won't be chased out again.

Allies: kylethekiwi, kitdragoness, Camilla8686
(Currently editing lore for dragons)

Notes to self:

Lightshade and Halwende reacting to Cordelia's exalt...

Leader: Rabbit
Deputy: Guinevere
Representatives: Banish, Rize, Elodie, Uranus, and Lato
Treasurer: Nightshade, Berwyn
Head of Guards: Raindance
Second and Third Head of Guards: Mars, Flan
Doctor: Emeraldfeild, Lato, Aina
Messenger(s): Atreus, Bluebird, Buck
Witches/Werlocks: Nereid, Hex, Leia, Luia, Felix, Othello, and Seraph
Enforcers/Guards: Pearl Lance, Bronze Sheild, Shortstack, Alois, Rabbit Foot, Buck, Charles, Midnight, Timo, Azure Storm, Sky Guard, Linya, Cavelight, Chikko, and more.
Ling Caregivers: Glowinglight, Halwende, Fawn
Cook: Applesweet, Soleth
Spies: Tealsprite
Blacksmith: Rarity
Construction: Carmine
Teachers: Timeaus, Leafscales, Goldspider, and Raindance
Mapmakers: Cosmo, Alight, Starless, Banish, and Lorelei
Sears: Seashell, Starless, Iceheart
Retired: Lightshade


Mates
Nightshade x Rabbit
Seashell x Raindance
Elodie x Tellami
Atrues x Pushkari (exalted)
Rize x Felix
Nereid x Berwyn
Emeraldfeild x Guinevere
Spiderlilly x Flan
(platonic) Rirari x Luia

(listen to critique)
Rabbit-
Nice work on the genes! She is very pretty! The apparel is quite small, though. I would recommend larger more noticeable apparel—unless, of corse, you were going for a small feel. c:
Nice bio! I would suggest talking a bit more about the dragon though, it mostly talks about her in general, well, her and the clan. I didn't see a lot of her personality! Adding that could make the story feel a bit more like we know her. c: Over all thought: Nice job! 5/10
Lightshade-
Pretty dragon. In his bio, I can defiantly see some improvements! Talking about himself more than the clan itself. Interesting story! I found quite a bit of things in both these bios that could be replaced or removed. Overall: 6/10
Luia-
Very pretty! Nice, beautiful genes! I really loved this story, I really thought that Luia could exist she seemed so realistic! Over all: 7/10